So hey this isn't a new chapter. I don't know what to say right now, well let's start from the starting.
So as you know Naruto is OVERPOWERED in my story and that's where I messed up. When I started writing my story I thought of making Naruto overpowered because why not, and now I see my mistake... I made him too Op.
I was really excited about writing my own story that I didn't even pay attention to how op Naruto was in my story. Like literally not only Naruto master's all the elements but he knows Hiraishin too.
I wanted Naruto to use strategies and use his mind but I made Naruto so op that he doesn't even needs to use his mind, when he can just spam clones and make them use Hiraishin or other Jutsus.
The only excuse I have is that 'He doesn't have any experience'. Thank God I didn't make Naruto learn to use the Kyuubi chakra, another thing is that my story is very cliche, maybe a bit different but that's it.
I also want Naruto to gradually become strong and loads of other things. I literally made so many strategies in my mind to make Naruto use them but in the end I made him too op.
Well that my viewers is how you ruin a story. Well...
Ja ne