I read a terrible fanfic!

Ch 2

...why would she?

And yes, she is a bastard child. And a bastard.

THIS IS WHY YOU DONT GIVE ARTEMIS A CHILD!

Arent all demigods bastard children? That statment carries no weight what so ever.

"What prophacy?!" "The one the oracle said! A daughter of Artemis will be a scurge to our camp, a poisened snake, with Artemis's mark, she is stamped! It is a mystery but now I know it means you must leave camp Half Blood before more people die!"

While I'm glad he's kicking her out, that prophecy is pretty obvious.

"Don't exile me, Im innocent!" I yelled.

NO YOU'RE NOT!

Why is she exiled? Isn't murder enough for a life sentence?

Camp Half Blood was my home, it stung in my heart to think I'd never see it again.

Weren't you complaining last chapter about how they killed Luke?

My gray eyes

Now they're GRAY? Make up what's left of your mind!

flashed, "You can't do this!"

Yes he can! Get Mr. D!

Pretty sure he can.

"Artemis mark!" He pointed, "It is YOUR EYES!"

Her hideous eyes!

...at least they aren't rainbows.

"What are they too beatiful for you!" I yelled because I was angry now,

Their ugly. Plain and simple.

Person yelling cause they're angry. Big fat surprise.

he was so hot but so stupid too!

You did not just call Chiron stupid!

You did not just call Chiron hot!

"I will seek out Artemis and the hunters, your camp is Raicest anyway!"

Well if she joins the Hunters, she can't have a love interest!

I staked from the room with my bow and arrow to pack!

I continue to give no fucks.

Wait, since she was bitching about how the world hated her and she had nothing, why does she own those bow and arrows?

The other demigods sneered as I truged back to cabin 11. Annabeth, who got transfer to the goddess Love cabin now

NO!NO!NO!NO!

You can't transfer cabins, its not like a promotion, it's who your parent is. So why the Hell is she going to Aphrodite's cabin?

There are actually quite a few goddesses of love, so ...

(I know her name is Apherdeti but theres no way in hell Im spelling that),

...why? Is their something wrong with her name? People reading, please explain this to me.

led them all to chase me away, only Ivy stood for me.

Why would she defend Grover's murderer?

Ivy is a traitor to her kind.

I packed by bow and arrows and my ipod

Now she has an iPod too?