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Scarletsong [Warrior Cats]

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by dewynosieTC

by dewynosieTC

Name
Scarletsong

I get her prefix, but why 'song' for her suffix? Because it sounds nice? Noooo.

Age
Exact age unknown... very young

Young warrior aged? Or does her age fluctuate depending on the roleplay? Both contain moderate to dangerously high levels of cliche.

Gender
She-cat

Sexual Orientation
Straight

Allegiance
ThunderClan

Otherwise known as DefaultClan.

Rank
Warrior

Otherwise known as Default Rank.

It's like you created a character and didn't bother to change anything from the default.

Relationship Status
Loves Hailpaw, an apprentice warrior of her Clan

Why does she love Hailpaw? (Emphasise any word in the sentence)

Physical Description
Flaming red fur, green eyes, pretty, no scars

There is no such thing as a flaming red cat, even in the warrior cats universe.

Personality Traits
Kind, caring, but a little shy

Let me amend that for you: Boring, one-sided, cliche.

Family
"NPC" parents, no littermates

Agh.

What this OC was created for
Roleplay

That's where most of the worst OCs spawn.

Any related fanfics
None

Backstory
Scarletsong was born to two normal random ThunderClan parents. She led a very normal life, until she got into a fight with a Clanmate.

Uh... and that isn't normal? If you never get into a fight with anyone, ever, then that isn't normal. I'm counting that as redundant information, and being boring on purpose.

How much you think your OC will score
50

How much your OC actually scored
38

A/N
Can this get any more boring??

Submitted by Bright_Whisker for Odsay on Discord

Special Requests
Criticise as much as possible