OC Reviews [on hold]

Introduction

Heya my dudes welcome to my OC Reviews book!

Or rather, 'OC First Impressions'! Basically what I do here is comment on my first impressions of your OC and then give you some tips on what to improve. I may not always have advice for you, and that would either be because your OC is a hopeless case or it's so well written that I can't find anything to fix.

Also, bear in mind that my compliments-to-criticism ratio is like 1:10 in most cases. It's not because you're that bad at OC-ing but I'm just here to tell you where your OC doesn't make sense, and besides, it's not like a lot of these OCs pleasantly surprise me in any way.

And here's a challenge for anyone who sees this, if I really like your OC then I'll make you fanart of them! Just add the phrase 'cats only cry from pain not sadness' to your review!