This was written by MagicalMysteryFood
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Cover: I love this cover! I love the pink color and the photo. I also like how you have a similar looking cover in the sequel.
Lucy: I really like this character. You feel really bad for her because of the trauma she and her brother have faced. Her brother doesn't seem so bothered by it, because he's still young. We also get to feel the neglect she faces from her dads.
The Beatles: They really neglect her. I don't like how they are like "we are having trouble, and instead of try to work it out, let's get a divorce." I think you could of talked about them at least going to marriage counseling or something.
Billy: really cute and really innocent. The writer uses this to there advantage to cause even more heartbreak.
Formate: God Job on keeping it easy to read and there wasn't many grammar mistakes that I saw.
Plot: it's an interesting story and it keeps me interested.
I give it: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ four and a half stars out of 5
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