what a feeling

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what a feeling,

what a feeling indeed

when she agreed

i saw it clearly

i was able to hold her dearly

if only the "was" wasn't a "saw"

as i could only watch her

it was such a blur

only to realize that there was no cure


tried a little rhyming poem for once, i know that some of my previous poems coincidentally rhymed in some sentences. however, i tried a full rhyming one now, hope that this works and you like it!


have a nice day

treat people with kindness!

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