I have a chapter done like this already. Ah well.
And WOW THE READS WENT UP SO FAST! THERE'S LIKE 13K? NO.
anyway
It really and extremely bothers me when people don't use speech marks correctly. Like, I learned speech marks when I was five. I'm not going to tell you how to use them, google it. Holy crap.
And I can't say this enough, PROOF READ, PEOPLE.
'His eyes were a pool of green.' Wow, you should probably get that checked out. Your eyes shouldn't have pools in them, the chlorine will irritate them.
Your - belonging to you
You're - you are
Their - belonging to them
There - a place or whatever
They're - they are
GET THEM RIGHT
Also, epilogues are sounding really stupid.
'We got married. Had three kids. Moved into a nice house and the band was super successful.'
That's what they are. All the same.
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almost 1k votes omg, can you please vote for this chapter? also 13K READS WTF GUYS WHY DO LIKE THIS SO MUCH I DO NOT GET IT
i also really love when you guys comment, i like it better than when you vote, so please comment x
tell me awful pick - up lines, best one gets a dedication
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