the first kissing scene from the original draft of retaliation

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warning: very different, strange, and overall, gross

also, corey's name was originally tyler so, that's what that's all about. enjoy...

I froze.

Wolf whistles were heard throughout the hall, as well as a muffled sob. I was clearly focused on all the wrong things before I realised that Tyler's hands were traveling down my body from my face, coming to rest on my hips. I paid attention to the feel of his full lips on mine and I liked it, but not like this.

Without a second thought, my hands became tangled in his soft, brown hair and my lips were pushing back, harder. I pulled on his hair, making him moan softly, a sound I could definitely get used to. I took his open mouth as an advantage and slipped my tongue inside. I heard the shutter of a camera, followed by more wolf whistles. You would think we were taking things too fast, but considering how quickly June 'moved on', we could just say we were secretly dating for a few weeks.

His tongue ran across mine, dancing together, another moan following. After him smirking smugly against my lips, I realised the sound had come from me. He squeezed my hips lightly as our tongues explored each other's mouths, him being quite skillful. I absolutely loved that he tasted like mint, one of my favorite things ever. Just then we heard two people running towards us, breathless.

i'm sorry to whoever had to read this... just ew. too much, thirteen y/o self, too much.

anyway, if you've enjoyed this book, please check out my others! my current WIP is called You're Not As Cool As You Think You Are :)

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