Proposal part II

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first of all my hearty apology to all of you.. i got so stuck in work that i couldnt update.. im really really sorry.. and as a compensation ill update next part within 2 days.. and thats pakka promise from my side :)

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"don't worry it wont be for long.. we are almost there.." and I smiled... I couldn't wait for the surprise. He started driving the car again and After a while the car stopped. I couldn't wait for the surprise and I clapped my hands in excitement and I could hear his chuckle. The car door opened and he picked me up taking me by surprise.

"manik.." I said in a worried tone.. "relax.." he said and I wrapped my hands around his neck. After few minutes he made me stand on my feet. I could smell something very exotic but it was sweet. I was wondering where were we and what is manik planning to do.

"don't open the blind fold until I tell you.." he whispered in my eyes and I shivered at our proximity.

"open your blindfold.." he told me and I did it a little slowly as my fingers were shivering. And the first thing I saw was manik was kneeling in front of me. "manik get up.." I said but he nodded his head in a NO. he took something from his pocket and I gasped. A ring..!!

He held out the ring and said with utmost sincerity and love

"Miss Murthy.. I manik malhotra am asking you officially will you be mine forever..?" and I nodded my head in a yes and he continued

"so yes... this ring comes with a set of promises from my side.. Ill always stay by your side no matter what.. in happiness and in you bad times.. in your crazy times and everything and anything possible. I want to get married to you. I know its kind of crazy but I want to do a favour to this world by keeping you with me as they all will be saved henceforth.." I glared at him for that sentence but he just chuckled and continued

"I want to love you more with each passing day.. I want to treat you like princess.. ill not say I wont fight with you because that's the best part.. I love to irritate the hell out of you and then calm you by making it up for you.. I want you to be the first face I see every morning and the last I see at night before sleeping peacefully in your oops our dreams.. and one more point to add....which ill tell you afterwards as I want it to be private and we have audience now.." he said but I couldn't shift my eyes away from him that I ignored the "audience" part

"and lastly.. I love you nandini malhotra.. I love you so so sooo much that you cant even imagine.." he finally ended and slipped the ring. It was a beautiful princess cut diamond ring. I smiled along with tears in my eyes and hugged him tightly as he stood up. He stumbled a little but hugged me back.

"I love you too manik.. I love you soo soo much.." I said and felt his arms tighten around me.


"we love you both so much.." I heard voices from behind and to say I was shocked would be an understatement. I saw Mom Dad Dadu Dj Mukti Abhi Aliya Dhruv Cabir Navya Soha Harshad Aryamaan and a laptop in which Amma Appa Ams Rishu bhai and bhabhi were watching us in a video call.. oh my goddd... aiyappaaaa.. they all saw this.. suddenly I felt shy.. I mean manik proposed me in front of the whole family and our friends... my cheeks were burning as never ever I felt this shy ever in my life. I slowly turned to manik and hugged him tightly hiding my flushed face. He chuckled and in hugged him more tightly trying my best to hide myself in him.

"beta inta kyun sharma rahi hai.." mom and dad said in a teasing tone and I blushed more.

"manik.. you said you will say something later.. what is it about haan ? humhae bhi to bata do.." I heard cabir's teasing voice.

"cabir.." manik said angrily but I didn't let him move

"bas karo tum sab.. marae bacchon ko pareshan math karo.." dj said saving us but I was in no mood to face them any soon.

"nandu.. manik toh ab buri tarah phas gaya hai.. usae saans toh lanae dae.." I heard preethi bhabhi's taunt from the laptop and I suddenly left manik and all laughed. I turned to run away from then but mukti and aliya stood in front of me blocking my way and other side were soha and navya. I was trapped.

"bas bahuth ho gayi masti.. beta sab log chalo.. lunch karlo.. bahuth der ho chuki hai.." dadu said and all nodded obediently but I didn't miss the 'we-will-not-leave-you-soon' looks from the girls. All the dishes in the lunch were my favourite and I loved it to the core. Dj was the best.. I love her so much.. more than manik.. umm no.. but yes I love her. Soon the lunch was over amidst lots and lots of teasing. Finally I escaped to our room saying I wanted to change as I was not used to heels and blah blah..

I changed into a white shirt and jeans and came into the room only to get pinned to the wall and guess who it was none other than Monster manik.

"what ??" I asked him and he smiled mischievously and said "didn't you forget something.." to which I nodded my head in a no. he sighed and said

"that I said ill tell you something after sometime.." oh yeah.. I smiled sheepishly and said "vo I forgot.. sorry.. ab batao.." I said excitedly and he smiled naughtily and said coming close to my ears

"I also want to make babies with you.. even if you agree or not im gonna have a cricket team in our house with our children.. and that's final"

and what he said last made me feel dizzy.. seriously.. cricket team.. its not going to happen..!! NOT AT ALL...!!


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