(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!!
Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
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Ok now that y'all read the profile, lets continue...the points i put in are base on the order the pictures are in, slowly going downwards
1) BLESS THIS BOY HE'S NOT MAGICAL 15.
2) his height and weight are unique because normally guy ocs have either an emo lanky look or athlete muscles
3) he should be part of the normal people fandom, i reside there
4) first impression of him is just another typical quiet friendless kid but later as i read...Damn. He's relatable af(to me at least) i can't stand heat, love some drama sprinkled into my life, hate people leaving me(i have a serious issue with that) Remember how i said he would be that one loner? Well then, He likes animals and are friends with them. LOOPHOLE OF THE LONER STEREOTYPE. HA.
5) For his backstory, sigh, the car crash and dead parents thing. Sigh. BUT. Unlike regular ocs, i actually sympathize with him because of the fact that he feels he was the reason as he begged them to come home. This shows that theres a legitimate "reason" for their death not because the creator just wanted to get rid of his parents. So thus, instead of screaming curses upon him liem i do with ocs, i honestly like this oc and feel like forming a protection squad.
6) At least he goes to a counselor. Other ocs be all: "oh im so depressed, so let me dwell in it" then after that they become crazy and kill everyone. -_-
In conclusion, he's definitely one of the better ocs I've seen in this junk of a book. As for improvement...i think the depression and dead parents death thing needs to scram, you can maybe say...uh they survived but had to be handicapped or something? Just a thought though.
