(Highest ranking #2 in marysue)
[previously titled "marysue roasts"]
*warning*
If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!!
Basically, you can send me whatever you want and...
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To be honest this oc is pretty good and well thought out, i don't know why you would think he's bad.... But if you really want critique then I'll give you critique.
1) why do his sisters who are just 14. POLE DANCE. Competitively too. I know it can be considered a sport but i don't think kids that age will like it. If you know what i mean.
And that's it. So im seriously confused why you think he is a horrible oc.
Marysue level: -1/10
Author's note: sorry guys i was on hiatus for awhile, i was busy doing other life related things so now I'll give you a spam of chapters including a special collab one coming up soon! Also im thinking of creating a new book called: deviantart trash. Lol what do you think that book is about
