Redney: The game that changed his life

Idea for a new story

Adam Dahlberg

• Twenty three Years of age
• Parents: Ex marine father and master criminal mother
• Description: Tall,dark Brown hair, glasses, brown/green eyes (may change)
• Skills: Agility,smart
• Charges: Theft of priceless diamonds and jewels

Ross botsford

• Twenty years old
• Parents: Both dead in car accident
• Description: Brown hair, really tall, glasses, blue eyes
• Skills, good with computers, can hack all systems
• Charges: Hacked into government building and took money, hacked apple.

Max laplume

• 22yrs old
• Parents: Both died in a tragic explosion
• Description: Short ginger hair, brown eyes, Z necklace, really tall.
• Skills: Bomber, and sniper
• Charges: Bombing Asia, turkey

Red Michael steves

• 22 years old
• Parents: Alive somewhere
• Description: Sorta tall ginger hair, short, sometimes wears glasses
• Skills: Assassin, with FBI training
• Charges: Killed Donald Trump

John barney winkleton

• 22yrs old
• Parents: Dead
• Description, short brown hair, foreign accent, really really tall
• Skills: Assassin
• Charges: Helped murder Donald Trump

Tim Destin

• 21yrs old
• Parents: Both scientist, don't know if he's still alive
• Description: Short, brown hair, brown eyes
• Skills: Thief, agility
• Charges, stole the Real Mona Lisa

Do you guys like this or do you think I should change anything it's for a criminal story.