The Blacker The Berry

Any Improvements??

This is an important update/chapter. I hope I'm not throwing the book off with these announcements. But this one is extrememly important.

So, currently, I am writing a new chapter for this book. I have realized and saw that there is a decline in comments as readers progress into my book. I just have quick question.

What are some suggestions/tips (from you guys) that I can incorporate into this book to add somewhat of a "flavor" in here?

For example, if I should add more descriptive words or make some grammatical errors or anything pertaining to that, please let me know. I'm not trying to be a drama queen or seem insecure, but alot of you guys have given me some beautiful "speeches" on how this book speaks to you. At the end of the day, I write this for you guys and whatever I can do to make it better, please let me know.

Btw, I'm not adding no stripper action or baby daddy drama in here. I don't want this book to be ratchet. This is an inspirational piece of art, not an insight to a strip club. Lmaoo

Please leave some advice. Even if its a plot idea, please share it. I will greatly appreciate it. If you wanna leave some constructive critism, be nice but leave some. I need to know what I can do to make this more lovable, if possible. ♡