'at first sight' Neteyam X Aonung (Discontinued)

7. betrayal

(made half of this in school and then it got deleted so I had to rewrite it 💀😭)

'neteyams pov

I woke up got out my room seeing that thare' was breakfast for me on the tabble I ate and went outside it was great weather ever since it rained

I went to the side of the village I layed down on the sand just thinking about everything about hoe beautiful this clan is but also about my home and what aonung' said yesterday would the sky poeple really attack us?

Well if they would I would protect every one of my siblings even if that meant me getting the pain

I had my eyes closed and my ears crossed under my head I then heard someone walking

'neteyam!!' I heard i opened my eyes seeing tuk looking at me she was exited for something I got up and said 'yes?' 'do you Wanna go swimming with us?' she said
'i don't know' I didn't really want to I just wanted to lay down I was kinda tired since I got late last night
'pleaseeee' she said
'fine only because of you' I mumbled
'yayyy!'

We walked over to them thare' was lo'ak ,his girlfriend tsireya ofc how could he go anywhere without her
Aonung, lil mosey ,and Kiri and also tuk with me

'lets go guys!' tsireya said

We jumped in them diving in and started swimming Kiri wondered off to do something and tuk went with her

We stayed thare after a bit i had to go and Kiri, tuk went with me we went home and started helping mom with dinner

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(Aonungs pov)

I saw my friends and went with them tsireya had to go home me and my friends hung out before thinking we should go hunt I got my gear and we wanted to swim off before we heard someone it was loak. Shit i tough they hate him

'hey aonung can I go with yo-' he stopped after he saw my friends

'what is he doing here do you know this creep?' friend 1 asked me whispering
'umn no..' i said to him
'well sure you can hunt with us..' friend 3 said
'but Thares some risks were going outside the reef' he smirked

Friend 3 hated him the most I was kinda scared for him

'no way dad would skin me!'lo'ak said
'yo aonung say something!' he said to me. I didn't wanna say this but I said 'guess were asking the wrong brother'
My friends laughed and I joined
'lets go.' he looked scared but also wanted to be like us I liked this kid

We started heading over thare he knew some skills then my friend 2 said
'i know I good spot follow me..' smirking
I knew whare he wanted to go that's the most dangerous spot out there..

(Just saw that my 'deleted part' wasn't deleted and now it apear to have not been  deleted 💀)

We went to that spot and friend 3 nodded me to say something
I showed loak to go forward and he did he tried to catch the fish but the friend 1 told friend 2 for them to leave him they told me and I wanted to say that their crazy

But they took my hand and pulled me away after we wore on our ilus friend 2 said 'look he's gonna be ok' I nodded and we went to the shore

'Lo'aks pov'

YESS I catch it I was so happy let's see the others reaction I looked back and saw nobody' did they leave me. I needed to breathe so I went up

My ilu was still there I was kinda scared but I kept positive

I was just sitting on my ilu before thare was a shark looking thing trying to eat me alive I jumped off my ilu and went into the water It kept following me a was scared so much

I went in the coral but he kept eating it and getting closer I was allreaddy struggling to breathe but I remembered what tsireya teached me
He went away I wanted to go up but he came back and I went to another coral 

He started eating it more I bumped on the back of it I thought . Shit shit shit this is gonna be my last day untill he went away I sighed tho I lost my last breath I wanted to be down still but I would die of drowning I went up

I saw the shark fish thing again I sighed and said I love you neteyam in my mind thinking this would be my last

Before he swallowed me whole

A tulkun came in and killed him I was so happy but I was so distracted I forgot I was loosing my breath I tried going up before I passed out.

I woke up on a tulkun on that tulkun that saved me 'you saved my live thank you' I said to him 'friends?' I said  he looked shocked and his eyes burst out 'yeah that's right were friends!' we started swimming and everything

'neteyams pov'

Whare the hell is lo'ak I'm so worried he has been gone ever since I had to go home whare is he Ill go look for him I saw aonungs friends and him thare laughing i started walking up to them but I heard something I never thought I would hear 'that forest boy' definitely will love the water after we left him thare' friend 3 sayd 'yeah hope that boy gets eaten by that shark that roams around' aonung said
Everyone laughed

I was shocked I went up to them
'what the hell did you guys do with my brother.' I said angry
Aonung looked at me shocked
'we stranded him in the middle of the ocean' friend 3 says laughing
'you what.'

I grabbed friends 3 hair and took my knife out treathning to cut it and make him blind i told him to follow me and the others also did

I went to my father, mother ,tonowari and Ronal

'tell him what you told me you fucking bitch' I said

He explained and they all 4 looked angry

We waited for lo'ak untill they found him

(Hah plot twist I feel tired lol hope you like it 😍😍)

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