Avoca: (Starts sweating).....who are you
Pumpkin: you don't know me but we were always meant to be together, my handsome mate
Avoca: ...(confused) what? Mate?
Pumpkin: you didn't revived the message that are general left us? Your my mate!
Avcoa: what message....general? What are you talking about, I'm your what?!
Pumpkin: we were supposed to be sent to the same planet but I guess your pod had different coordinates and it took you to another planet
Avoca: ... I'm just supposed to believe you?
Pumpkin: well it really doesn't matter because I'm just here for you so I'll take you back in the easy way or the hard way
Avoca: ...how about I don't go, how about I stay and you stop saying weird things cause my wife might get mad at me
Pumpkin: I don't care if you have a wife, I'll kill her if I have to but your coming with me
Avoca didn't like what she said one bit
Avoca: ...you dare touch my 21 AND I'LL KILL YOU!!!!
pumpkin charged at Avoca and went for a punch which took him by surprise but he managed to doged and transform into a super Saiyan 3 as well
Avoca: do you have this? (Makes his evil aura appear)
Pumpkin: are whole species has it (makes her evil aura appear)
Avoca: but have you trained it?! (Charges at her)
Pumpkin: trained it?
Avoca punched pumkin in the face which sent her flying away, Avoca followed her and kept punching her over and over, she had very little control over the evil power and because of that she didn't get power like Avoca got, Avoca had his foot on her stomach and was looking down on her
Avoca: I beat you now le-
Someone grabbed his tail, and only women can make his body react that way, only his women or Saiyan women like what Vegeta said. Avoca looked over his shoulder only to see two identical girls
Avoca: who are you two? (Painfully tone)
2 girls: nion and niun
Avoca: alright nion and niun let my tail go and there won't be any problems, I'm only going to say it once
Pumpkin: hehe, I guess it did work
Avoca turn back to face pumpkin but she was standing right Infront of him
Avoca: how did you, how did I not feel you getting up?
Pumpkin: simple really, you were distracted, well it's time for pay back
Avoca: what?
Pumpkin punch Avoca in the gut 3 times which really hurt him because his tail was being pulled so it made him weaker and less durable, Avoca coughed out blood
Pumpkin: I'm sorry, I don't like hurting you but you hurt me so it's only fair
Avoca: ...aaaargggghhh, let me go!
Nion: well pumpkin let's get him on the ship and let's leave already!
Pumpkin: where's jinjer?
Niun: she's some where out there
Pumpkin: go find her, nion help me take him to the space ship
Nion: what do I do to help you?
Pumpkin: now that I think about it just grab his tail and I'll do the rest
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The Evil Saiyan Avoca (Rewritten)
FanfictionThe story takes place on a planet where an ancient species of Saiyans lived on, however the story is mainly focused on a young saiyan named Avoca, he was sent to a very far planet, because the planet was being invaded, they sent him with more young...
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