an explanation, if you'd please read.

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Okay.

For those who've read my previous book don't need to read my reasoning.

But for the new readers, here's the reason;

I didn't like how the last one was coming out.

...or CAME out for that matter.

After a while, I realized how messy it all was.

I've already stated that hybrid sirens are born with full awareness like a horse foal but I still felt that the way they acted so abnormally mature was a bit too uncanny.

And let's not forget how the growth of them was inconsistent. They went from the size of a hamster to a toddler in just a few pages. Tell me that's not rushy.

I also wanted to incorporate a few episodes of SUF future in someway, but again, my greatest enemy is the time inconsistencies.

And if you really look at it, I kinda shoved Steven's protective behavior into your faces.

So I figured, it's time I pulled a Spinel and rejuvenated the entire book, to something with a little more depth.

Of course the other one will still be up, and maybe, if desired, I'll continue from where I left off there.
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For now, please enjoy this [hopefully] better formed story of what happens when a mildly traumatized, directionless teen hybrid comes into contact with an still innocent, baby hybrid.

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