Round 207 - October 31 - November 6, 2021

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, October 31–Saturday, November 6, 2021, 11:59 P.M. PDT

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: SapphireAlena 

COMMENT TOPIC: The narrative must support the dialogue by exposing the underlying tension, conflict, and motivation of each character

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COMMENT TOPIC: The narrative must support the dialogue by exposing the underlying tension, conflict, and motivation of each character. How has the author used subtext like gestures, glances, body language, and behavior to help you gauge the protagonist's motivation in each chapter? Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

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