Round 197 - August 22 -August 28, 2021

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, August 22 – Saturday, August 28, 2021, 11:59 P.M. PST

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: SapphireAlena

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: SapphireAlena

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Check out our new reviewing options! Need a beta read instead of a meta analysis? How about a light edit? Have an ONC that needs the special Wayfarer's touch? Check out the options in the new chapters of this book

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COMMENT TOPIC: Characters in a novel never just talk. Good dialogue has a purpose and escalates toward something. If dialogue stays neutral and flat, it feels empty. Is the author's dialogue escalating toward a purpose? Be specific when supporting your answer. Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

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