TOBIAS POV
When her body first hit the net, all I registered was a gray blur. I pulled her across it and her hand was small, but warm, and then she stood before me, short and thin and plain and in all ways unremarkable-except that she had jumped first. The Stiff had jumped first. Even I didn't jump first. Her eyes were so stern, so insistent. Beautiful.
But that wosn't the first time I ever saw her. I saw her in the hallways at school, and at my mother's false funeral, and walking the sidewalks in the Abnegation sector. I saw her, but I didn't see her; no one saw her the way she truly was until she jumped.
I suppose a fire that burns that bright is not meant to last.
*HEY GUY SO I HAVE BEEN INCORPORATING THE LAST COUPLE CHAPTERS OF ALLEGIANT,BUT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER I WILL START TO ADD MY OWN WRITING. HOPE YOUR LOVING IT SO FAR. VOTE, COMMENT. ID LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU. ALWAYS TAKING SUGGESTIONS. -PATIENCE
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Convergent: Book 1 (completed)
Fanfiction*MAJIOR ALLEGIANT SPOILERS IN THE BEGINNING! IF YOU HAVE NOT READ ALLEGIANT YET OR HAVE NOT READ THE SERIES THAN GO READ IT! ITS AMAZING!* WHEN TRIS IS SHOT BY DAVID IN THE WEPONS LAB, LITTLE DID SHE KNOW, SHE WAS PREGNATE. WITH TWINS? WHEN SHES SHO...
