The Lioness Who Roared
by conquestofthesomnium
Crime & New Adult | English
Third Person Point of View
❂ SUMMARY - You took away the thrill of being able to read your work and not know a lot of the details about it because you basically summarized the first 10 chapters of your book. With this kind of "blurb" I'd definitely get bored reading the actual book... 'cause why would I bother reading when you've already summarized it for me?
The first five chapters of a book are important. You should be able to capture your reader's attention in the first five chapters, if it drags on to more than 10, you might lose half—or more—of your readers in the process. Hence, the idea of you summarizing the first 10 chapters and using it as a blurb... I do not recommend it.
As much as possible, make it thrilling by withholding information. You don't need to have a long blurb because most of the time, long blurbs are too tedious to read. If you can reduce that to half... better.
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