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7; The Seduction by -IndieWriter-

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por _aletha

The Seduction
by -IndieWriter-
General Fiction & Thriller/Mystery | Filipino & English
1st Person Limited

a short review for a short story

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❂ I can't point out the specifics but... I feel like your blurb is too compact. The second sentence appears to be relying on your first sentence instead of being able to stand alone. The only advice I can give is to rephrase it.