Chiaroscuro of Life, Superhero from Death by MariaOtinobo Spiritual & Mystery | Filipino 1st Person
this is probably the shortest and the quickest review i've done so far
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❂ FIGURE OF SPEECH - al teast explain why you compared her to a train. The way you used it makes no sense to me because I cannot understand what you mean by the comparison.
❂ INFORMATION - the first sentence was the only information you gave us about your character and your work. You need to at least give us more about who Marissa is and what her story is about. I understand that you want to leave a mysterious impression on your blurb, pero it really did lack a lot of aspects of a good blurb.
➤ Character - introduce your main character a bit more, kasi as of now, you just told me her name and a comparison that doesn't really make any sense.
➤ Conflict - I presume your second sentence is supposed to explain your story's conflict, but I know that there is more to your story than just that.
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