HORROR/PARANORMAL
Judge: Brownieislove
Someone is here by Jenisundar
Cover- 7/10
Title- 9/10
Blurb- 7/10
Flow- 7/10
Scared/intrigued me- 5/10
Character development- 6/10
Writing style and grammar- 2.5/5
Hook/increased my curiosity- 8/10
Followed me- 0/10
Overall impression- 12/15
TOTAL- 63.5/100
Review- the cover and title are nice but can be better, cover is very simple and doesn't depict the storyline much. Title could have been something related to the story. You can elaborate the description giving a feel of an horror suspense events occurring within the book. Honestly it was very predictable maybe because you chose frictional characters from TV so I knew they wouldn't be harmed thou at some point I was curious and the twist of Abhi being possessed was a good click. Few grammar and spelling typos here and there, can be fixed easily. All in all good story.
✿°•∘ɷ∘•°✿ ... ✿°•∘ɷ∘•°✿ ... ✿°•∘ɷ∘•°✿
Samay ka chakravyuh by Psr1403
Cover- 9/10
Title- 10/10
Blurb- 8/10
Flow- 9.5/10
Scared/intrigued me- 9/10
Character development- 9.5/10
Writing style and grammar- 4.5/5
Hook/increased my curiosity- 9/10
Followed me- 10/10
Overall impression- 13.5/15
TOTAL- 92/100
Review- title is on point depict the storyline perfectly, cover is good but can be more intriguing and something related to past life can be added. Blurb can be improved, giving a insight of the plot rather than characters only. Flow and character development is really nice, few grammar and spelling typos are there but can be corrected after a re-read. I was not completely hooked with the story in the first two chapters but later on it was really interesting and attractive.
✿°•∘ɷ∘•°✿ ... ✿°•∘ɷ∘•°✿ ... ✿°•∘ɷ∘•°✿
The abandoned house by Dhanu_shyamindi
Cover- 8/10
Title- 8/10
Blurb- 10/10
Flow- 8.5/10
Scared/intrigued me- 8.5/10
Character development- 9/10
Writing style and grammar- 3/5
Hook/increased my curiosity- 9/10
Followed me- 10/10
Overall impression- 13/15
TOTAL- 87/100
YOU ARE READING
Orchid Awards 2021
Random[ ] Open [ ] Judging [🌸] Closed "An awards is not only a great prestige or a mark of excellence, but is also a tremendous boost for someone to strive and excel higher and aim for even bigger accomplishments in life." Welcome! The latest a...
