JUDGE: Askaninn Whoa. Reading this work was such an amazing experience. It's even hard to describe how much I loved this book. From the casual and intense writing style (where you can see the small details as using the words of title in bold in the body of the poem) to the message that hits deep and precise, this work made a good impression on me. It's painful, raw and totally inspiring.
JUDGE: ANParker4123 I think the concept is pretty old but I must mention that the way it is written is really good.
JUDGE: Askaninn Well, "Breathing Love" seems to be a good story, but I could see some problems when I was reading it. There were good points in the story: I like the characters and the plot. "Chick novels" are very tricky, because you need to use all the "cliches" to make the formula works, but you need to be careful to use them wisely - for your story don't get too boring - and to put something different on it, so people can see how singular is your story. The characters need more development and I'd suggest to the author think in her special element (that something unique that will make her story remarkable). There were also some grammar mistakes (what would be comprehensible if the author weren't an English native speaker) that need to be corrected.
JUDGE: ANParker4123 I think the concept is really nice and something unlike the normal books but maybe there could be an improvement in the way of writing.
