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Judge: crazySaddistAlien Grammar: The story has a very few mistakes in regards with grammar. Another things was that, the author sometimes forget to put some punctuations after several words. But it's not that noticeable, unless you pay attention to it. Character Building: The characters were good enough to swindle readers' emotions though it has some slip ups. Nevertheless, the character has strong impact and has an easy-going personality that makes the readers feel cool with it. Writing Style: At first, I was confused whether the story was about some sort of mafia thing because of some things. But later on, as the story goes, I found what it's really all about. Uniqueness of Plot: There are some similarities with other novels, but it doesn't completely follows those novels' paths that makes this story recognizable compared to other works. Overall Enjoyment: I liked it! I like how the author take things slow. ☆ The story 'all hale the king' is written in a very entertaining way. It's a story where you'll find yourself curious of the things that was about to happen. It also possesses light aura that'll make the readers enjoy the story more. It's good that the author took his/her time in unraveling the things and showed very well how the characters differs in many aspects. Overall, it's a very good one and I recommend this story to a lot of readers. Just a tip, the author should also pay attention in applying punctuations after words (in doesn't affect the overall beauty of the novel though).
Judge: Riredia There were a few minor grammar mistakes (knewly instead of newly) that were a teeny bit distracting, but I knew what they meant. The book is a fanfiction of sorts, but I imagine that the characters are well portrayed. Some gifs were added, most likely from the show, but the writing was ver dead with no sense of emotion. I'm rather unfamiliar with the fandom, but it seems tropey. Overall, I think that if you understood the show(or whatever it's from, I'm not sure) it would be good! But since I'm rather uneducated, it wasn't enjoyable for me.
Judge: Stargaryenn -Grammar: A lot of missing punctuation marks and misspelled words. -Character building: Gage is such a cinnamon roll. He is very lovable and grows on the reader very quickly. Also, Stiles is easy to like and provides an anchor to the plot since he is more stable than the other characters. -Writing Style: It is basic with slight additions and descriptions. However, it could use some upgrading. -Uniqueness of Plot: It is a cliché plot. Nevertheless, author keeps on adding twists, making the book enjoyable. -Overall enjoyment: Even though the grammatical mistakes were annoying, I really enjoyed reading the book. -comments: I honestly didn't think I'd like this book one bit since it's a fan-fiction of a show I do not watch or is familiar with at all. However, I was wrong. I actually found the book quite fun.
