Prologue:
(y/n) has three tails in wolf form. Also she's no longer lived for 500 years. She's only been around for roughly 300 years.
Chapter 1:
(y/n) is NOT, I repeat, NOT in any way connected to any known goddess as of yet. I have completely removed Hanaokami from the story (unfortunately)
General edits in conversations etc.
Chapter 2:
General edits
'Child of Mori' replaced Hanaokami. 'Mori' as in 'Forest'.
Chapter 3-9:
*chapter 4 – I changed the music accompanying the chapter.
General edits
(y/n) also reverted to calling Nanami 'san' in most cases.
Changes to (y/n) and Tomoe's relationship:
She's a lot colder to him, and is more uncomfortable instead of embarrassed around him, and still has the urge to stab him when he's not looking.
I've always felt that (y/n) and Tomoe's relationship was moving a bit too fast from "I-hate-you-because-you-murdered-my-family-and-I-need-to-kill-you" to "oh-gosh-I-love-you-even-though-I-don't-want-to".
I've always thought of (y/n) as rather closed off and untrusting person because of her past, so even just accepting Tomoe this fast was not ideal.
Chapter 10:
Added extra scene where Tomoe found (y/n)'s burnt hand and remembered what she said the previous chapter about him burning her and his response.
Chapter 11-13:
General edits.
Mikage healed (y/n)'s hand.
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SheWolf : Story Retold - Kamisama Kiss
FanfictionTomoe X reader fanfic. Characters, (some) storyline and multimedia links to the chapters do not belong to me, unless specified. I do not take credit except for those that are my own original work. The pale moonlight shone down upon her kneeling figu...
