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Pen Your Pride


11.3K Reads 106 Votes 14 Part Story
Jess By MusicLoverSWS Updated Aug 16, 2012

[My Life is Full Of Drama, Without Being the Soulmate of the Vampire Prince]Gabriella or most call her Bree, goes to her brothers Wrestling match, and bumps into the hottest guy she has ever seen! Why is he so interested in her though? oh and did I mention he's not from her school, and has no idea how she will ever see him again well besides tomorrow at the wrestling match, but what will happen the next day?....

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  • prince
  • soulmate
  • vampire
  • without
writerbird writerbird Jun 21, 2011
hey good job.  watch out for mistakes and a few I's when it should have him's or me's. story was pretty good tho it was weird how a guy is shirtless and just prancing a girl around a school. O.O lol. but good so far. 
HannahLou95 HannahLou95 Jun 19, 2011
nice long title there :) good story btw (: its well written and a good beginning (:
Armiella Armiella Jun 19, 2011
It seems like protagonist girls have a habit of literally running into hot guys at the beginning of stories here a lot. 
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Jun 18, 2011
wow, that's a long title lol anyway this is really good! nice details, good hook, and it written nicely *voted* :)
tianajade tianajade Feb 09, 2011
I think it's an OK beginning. Maybe slow it down a bit, it was really fast paced. A few grammar errors here and there, such as fullstops, commas and capital letters. Some more description would be good to add also. Good start though, keep writing.
JMMbookworm JMMbookworm Jan 17, 2011
Wow, this story is cool!!! But (there's  always a but. Hehe) I think that you should make it a little slow on the part of them liking each other. But if your story plot or whatever your story  plan wants it to be like that, then it's ok. But I defenetly love it!! UPLOAD SOON!! ;P