Unexpected Love

Unexpected Love

39.5K Reads 521 Votes 20 Part Story
Holly Johnson By ChicChique88 Completed

Amber Ashturn is a normal teenage girl living a dream life in the Bahamas. Everything from her amazing, cozy beach-home to her friends she's had since preschool, was absolutely perfect; that is, until Amber's parents get a divorce and she is forced to move up to the Oregon Coast with her mom. Amber instantly wishes to go back to her old stomping grounds and resists to blend in with this "new life".  However, the meeting of a mysterious, cute guy may sway her mind. Will Amber move back to her sweet dream? Or will Oregon turn out to be a beautiful nightmare?

*This story is currently in the process of being edited. Thanks for your patience and I hope you enjoy!*

NaughtyYetNice NaughtyYetNice Sep 24, 2014
I'm from Oregon ^_^ I don't live by the beach but I'm not tooooooo far from it lol only about 45 minutes to and hour or so ^_^. great start ^_^
Amanda95d Amanda95d Feb 05, 2012
I love it so far! Also the beginning of it is exactly like how my life is!
ChicChique88 ChicChique88 Aug 09, 2011
Thank you guys so much for all the positive feedback on my story! @YuliFernandez for an answer to your question, I'm done with this story for now, but if you like it you can check out the sequel Beach Love. Again, thank you guys so much for the comments! I really apreciate them!(:
vantablack vantablack Feb 05, 2011
Pretty good. She could have just stayed with her dad, though. Saved her mom a world of complaining.
tianajade tianajade Jan 16, 2011
It's alright so far. Make sure you seperate your paragraphs more, and your dialogue, so they're not in such big chunks; makes it easier to read (: Good job though!