Burning Desire [ON HOLD]

Burning Desire [ON HOLD]

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Abeer By Abeer_Sx Updated Jul 24, 2016

"Cariño remember, I always get what I want" He smirked as he caged me against the wall

"Oh really? Best of luck with that"  I said as I crossed my arms, not even afraid of the jerk standing in front of me because I knew he wouldn't ever hurt me

Thiago Rodriguez, a Spanish multimillionaire with everything present in his life including good looks and intelligence. He is funny, caring and loving but cocky and an arrogant head too.

Valerie Anderson, smartass and sarcastic are the two best words to describe her. The words 'love' and 'care' only exist for her close ones. She is kind to everyone but if you annoy or irritate her, she would ruin your existence just with her words. And the main thing, every single nerve in her body despises Thiago. 

Join this roller coaster journey of Valerie and Thiago as they go through the emotions of hate, jealousy, passion, attraction and desire.

  • arrogant
  • caring
  • cocky
  • desire
  • feisty
  • hate
  • humor
  • jealousy
  • passion
  • sarcastic
  • smartass
november1567 november1567 Jun 14, 2016
its good..I love it..a good intro for the lead  characters in this story..
                              Good job! :-)
Niinziie Niinziie Aug 31, 2016
You Are Writing In Two Different Types Of Persona Stick To I Or He Or Sheee ... God Damn You Got Me Confused -_- And Uninterested -_- #MyOpinion #ConcernedReader
Minorisakamaki Minorisakamaki Aug 15, 2016
I like it , but  ur  English is very  bad! Try to write a bit more nicely
lolipopscandy123 lolipopscandy123 Aug 22, 2016
Amazing book I hope 😻I become a great writer like u by any chance can u check out my new book it's my first one 😳❣
Fatimah_FP Fatimah_FP Jun 16, 2016
OMG... one new book of urs ... great.. :) keep writing... SUPERB with capital S... ;)
Lottiiee_x Lottiiee_x Sep 19, 2016
I really like this but just a bit of advice re-read it so you can see that you've mixed up the perspectif sometimes