Burning Desire

Burning Desire

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Abeer By Abeer_Sx Updated Apr 13

"Cariño remember, I always get what I want" He smirked as he caged me against the wall

"Oh really? Best of luck with that"  I said as I crossed my arms, not even afraid of the jerk standing in front of me because I knew he wouldn't ever hurt me

Thiago Rodriguez, a Spanish multimillionaire with everything present in his life including good looks and intelligence. He is funny, caring and loving but cocky and an arrogant head too.

Valerie Anderson, smartass and sarcastic are the two best words to describe her. She doesn't care about abyone else except her closed ones. She is living a contended life with her boyfriend. But what when something really unexpected happens and leaves her heart shattered into pieces?

Join this roller coaster journey of Valerie and Thiago as they go through the emotions of hate, jealousy, passion, attraction and desire.

  • arrogant
  • caring
  • cocky
  • desire
  • feisty
  • hate
  • humor
  • jealousy
  • passion
  • sarcastic
  • smartass
november1567 november1567 Jun 14, 2016
its good..I love it..a good intro for the lead  characters in this story..
                              Good job! :-)
Niinziie Niinziie Aug 31, 2016
You Are Writing In Two Different Types Of Persona Stick To I Or He Or Sheee ... God Damn You Got Me Confused -_- And Uninterested -_- #MyOpinion #ConcernedReader
lolipopscandy123 lolipopscandy123 Aug 22, 2016
Amazing book I hope 😻I become a great writer like u by any chance can u check out my new book it's my first one 😳❣
Fatimah_FP Fatimah_FP Jun 16, 2016
OMG... one new book of urs ... great.. :) keep writing... SUPERB with capital S... ;)
Lottiiee_x Lottiiee_x Sep 19, 2016
I really like this but just a bit of advice re-read it so you can see that you've mixed up the perspectif sometimes