Finding August [MXM]✓

Finding August [MXM]✓

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Saint Caliendo By saintc Completed

August walked out of Vincent's life the same way he walked in - unexpectedly.

Vincent had a decent quiet life working as a tattoo artist in the city of Detroit, until the runway aspiring artist August knocks at his front door asking for a home. August promises it will only be for a year and Vincent agrees, but Vincent never knew that August keeping to that promise was going to be so painful.
  
Now Vincent sees August in the news just months after his disappearance. August is making it big and will be holding his first exhibition in New York. The thing is, Vincent can't just seem to stop himself from chasing after him.
  
Cover by @WhiteCoconut23

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veronica-h veronica-h Jul 16, 2017
The "concerning August" can be removed since we understand that you're talking about him.
Dearest_Writer Dearest_Writer Jun 17, 2017
"of" should either be "He still couldn't shake him off his mind" or "He still couldn't shake him out of his mind"
veronica-h veronica-h Jul 16, 2017
Maybe you could add something like: "It didn't matter to Vincent" to show what the character thought of August's race.
BiersacksKitten BiersacksKitten Jul 01, 2017
I think it should be 'He still couldn't shake him off of his mind'
veronica-h veronica-h Jul 16, 2017
I think the sentence "He left like a ghost, . . ." would provide more impact if you made it into two separate sentences. Like: "He left like a ghost, a faint memory. And yet, he was still very vivid in Vincent's mind." And then start a new paragraph from "Vincent should have expected it."
sad-witch sad-witch Jan 01
i just put water over fire until it boils and then the tetley stuff