FOG / 13 Years

FOG / 13 Years

112 Reads 18 Votes 2 Part Story
Thomas By 5ifthproject Updated Apr 24, 2016

#100WordScream: WattVampires ~ Summer Challenge : Describe thirst in 100 words or less. I counted, and I have to admit. I really cheated on this one : ) 

See #HappyDeathDay - Paranormal Community 28 Words Challenge "13 Years" https://goo.gl/TH9N1H

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tejaswiniaura tejaswiniaura Mar 18, 2016
A gripping story...well written and with a wonderful flow...:)
stripey stripey Mar 18, 2016
A great story ,you certainly captured the atmosphere of this place perfectly Thomas, perhaps you should think of writing more of these short stories, voted
rosaimee rosaimee Mar 17, 2016
Wow This was awesome to be read. I'm glad you posted this story. Neatly written and so dark. I like the modern gothic air in this.
SamanthaSLK SamanthaSLK Sep 14, 2016
I need to avoid this bus stop! :D
                              Nice use of colour and mood.  Creepy and enjoyable.
                              x
RKClose RKClose Mar 17, 2016
I'm so impressed with this effort, Thomas! Did you have fun? I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the dedication and welcome to the dark side. ;)
ChrisBuono ChrisBuono May 09, 2016
Great atmosphere, @5ifthproject ! Eerie. Love the '50s Olds in the mix.