Walking Tall

Walking Tall

16.7K Reads 486 Votes 20 Part Story
Shelby Root By skittle_munche Updated Jan 30, 2017

Claire savored the taste of her Native American, Tall. After saving her from being raped by her ex boyfriend, her and Tall become inseprible, but her ex, Andrew won't have it. If he can't have Claire then by god that damn Indian can't either. Andrew will stop at nothing to get what he wants even if it means he dies trying.

  • american
  • kidnapping
  • native
  • romance
  • tracking
RebeccaTackett RebeccaTackett Aug 10, 2017
The idea of this story is interesting, but everything else needs work. It feels rushed and confusing.
jessica1028 jessica1028 Oct 10, 2017
Wait is she still naked and covered with mud when he puts her on the horse?
- - Jun 19, 2017
What happened to the 'I'm kidnapped by Indians call the cops part" xD
mommapunkin mommapunkin Feb 16, 2016
Me neither! We are all humans! I was raised to not see the color of skin,  but to see the good or bad in the individual. To me to judge someone on their skin color would be down right stupid and ignorant!!
Knynguzman Knynguzman Dec 03, 2013
Interesting plot but there's alot of fixing to be done. If you want I can help revise your story including editing too