Walking Tall

Walking Tall

13.9K Reads 449 Votes 20 Part Story
Shelby Root By skittle_munche Updated Jan 30

Claire savored the taste of her Native American, Tall. After saving her from being raped by her ex boyfriend, her and Tall become inseprible, but her ex, Andrew won't have it. If he can't have Claire then by god that damn Indian can't either. Andrew will stop at nothing to get what he wants even if it means he dies trying.

The idea of this story is interesting, but everything else needs work. It feels rushed and confusing.
What happened to the 'I'm kidnapped by Indians call the cops part" xD
mommapunkin mommapunkin Feb 16, 2016
Me neither! We are all humans! I was raised to not see the color of skin,  but to see the good or bad in the individual. To me to judge someone on their skin color would be down right stupid and ignorant!!
Knynguzman Knynguzman Dec 03, 2013
Interesting plot but there's alot of fixing to be done. If you want I can help revise your story including editing too