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All Too Well [Wattys2017]

All Too Well [Wattys2017]

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kat By mileysmuffins Updated 21 hours ago

"Who made you be this way?" He asked curiously as he focused on me intensely.
I scoffed. "The devil in disguise did. He burned me in hell."
"Is he the reason for those scars on your arms and wrists too?" His voice came out so low, which caused me to pull the sleeves of my sweater further down.
"He was. Besides, those are not scars, they are battle wounds." I sucked a deep breath in.
"A battle with whom?" His eyes were filled with concern and I had to avert my gaze from his to the glass of water in front of me.
Imagine falling so deep in love that you eventually lose yourself. 
Imagine falling so deep that you're scared you might never be able to forget him and all the pain, heartache and sadness he put you through.
Imagine falling so deep that you find yourself crying your heart and lungs out on the cold bathroom floor in the middle of the night just hopelessly screaming and begging to get over him. 
highest rank: #30 in Teen Fiction [02/19/2017]

HarmonysLoveHP HarmonysLoveHP 3 days ago
I like the lead in before the story actually begins. It gives us some insight as to what the character is thinking and what he/she is going through before we are thrown into the story. I've been reading a lot of books that are in this same genre lately and I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Omg I live this! I'm going to quote it and give you credit!! IM GOING TO USE THIS QOUTE!!!! Just a good reminder to never give up!!
HarmonysLoveHP HarmonysLoveHP 3 days ago
You had me hooked from the start! Very nice. It was a good introductory chapter and I look forward to reading more of it!
Well.....Hello Mr.Hottness, I'm Emma.   
shutupxox shutupxox Apr 21
Are the rewritten chapters dramatically changed or just slightly changed?
Holy heavens. If I'm in love with what you wrote in this page, I can't imagine how amazing the actual story will be❤😍