Liam Payne Knocked On My Door

Liam Payne Knocked On My Door

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emily By niallh1993 Completed

Chapter 1

     Hello, my name is Grace. It's a typical Saturday night here in LA. Well, typical as it could be... I've been staying at the W Hotel here in Westwood for the past 2 days. I used to live with my boyfriend...err ... ex-boyfriend, but when I walked into our room to find another girl I couldn't take it. So here I am eating cookie dough ice cream watching Titanic all alone on a Saturday night... *sigh* 

      Don't get me wrong Titanic is a great movie, but I can't help but think that guy Jack had a girlfriend back home waiting for him and here he is in a car with some girl he just met. 'omg what am I thinking?' 

       I pause the movie and continue to eat my ice cream. 'Silence, this is so much better.' Then all of a sudden I heard a knock at the door, I start to walk to the door but pass my reflection. I realize I don't look so great, my normally long brown hair is tied in a messy bun, my makeup is somewhat smeared from the movie and my outfit isn't helping me one bit. I...

THAT MADE MY HEART BREAK INTO ONE THOUSAND LITTLE PEICES!!! OH MY GRRRD
AshleyKatniss AshleyKatniss Oct 22, 2012
lol, loved it awww it was so sweet! anyways, you should make your chapters longer, like arounf 1,500 words :)
AshleyKatniss AshleyKatniss Oct 22, 2012
lol! when i read the title i was like "OMG I HAVE TO READ THIS!" pretty good so far :)