Criminal in love

Criminal in love

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Kefiyah By Adetayo6 Updated Nov 03, 2014

He placed his knife on her neck as she squirmed beneath him. Blood trickled down her neck. She waited for death like her servants waited on her at home, but it never came. She opened her eyes and caught his gaze. He was even more handsome up close and his green eyes were seductive. He just held the knife to her neck. 
Then he stood and threw the knife away. She shifted away from him and he eyed her emotionlessly from where he stood. She shivered as she thought of the brutal way he killed Lillian and Jamie. Before she could say a word, he took her by the wrist and dragged her out of the room.

  • adetayo
  • criminal
  • dimitri
  • love
  • regan
Happ1ness1 Happ1ness1 Jan 06, 2017
I really like this story, but if you did it in first person it would be much better and less confusing
Adetayo6 Adetayo6 Dec 28, 2015
thanks RimmalHussain....Your comment is an inspiration...believe it or not