Awakening

Awakening

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Taylor By taylor2240 Updated Feb 18, 2016

The Great War between Heaven and Hell happened eons ago, and when Heaven won the fallen were banished. But now they seek another chance, to fight for a different outcome. In something so cataclysmic and important what could a young 18 year old Carla Clapp have to do with any of it? Nothing, at least that's what she thinks until she meets Ryker; a cunning, ruthless, and all too handsome servant of Hell whose job it is to find Carla and take her back with him. As unwilling as she is to trust in the one thing she's been taught to fear Carla makes the decision to put her faith in Ryker. But Ryker is keeping secrets; ones that hold the fate of whether Carla lives or dies. Can Carla breathe new life into the hard heart of Ryker? Will she find her place among a feud that has raged since time began? And will she follow her destiny, or shape her own? 

  • angles
  • demons
  • heaven
  • hell
AngelSkulls AngelSkulls Jul 21, 2014
Omg, you use the same cover as my story, Angels, Demons and Humans! Although, you've probably had your story out longer!!
Erose115 Erose115 May 03, 2013
love the writing - the descriptions are phenonemenal and the syntax is great :D
                              but you probably want to make the dialogue into different sentences to make it easier :D
ByeByeMelody ByeByeMelody Apr 30, 2013
Chapter 1 and you have a clear view on what's going on while hinting clues to secrets you will be needing to know about!!! Awesome! I like the saga!!!! After you finish this make a book 2!!!  :))
taylor2240 taylor2240 Mar 27, 2013
@cashmaree well I have to finish this one first. Lol but this ones probably a little over halfway done. After that then ill start on the sequel.
TeaPartyPrincess TeaPartyPrincess Feb 25, 2013
A lot of information to digest - I would have preferred to read more description, I don't feel that I know how the two character look like, only hints at their appearance.
jessicrap jessicrap Feb 15, 2013
hahaha do you want to know? or should i save hold on to it until you finish the story? lol im sure you won't have a problem being creative :-) just look at the work you've already done :-)