Feedbackplease Cerita

This is a fantasy story about a boy living in a land ruled by a tyrant. Poverty, and crime are rampant in the streets and he took to stealing for survival but gets caugh...

life, thoughts. everything summed up into 917 characters. you wouldn't understand much but, let your mind soak up the words and take them to heart just a little bit.

just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read thi...

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

I'll write more if you guys like it!

-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's en...

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night