So... my mom was reading this and brought up something that made me wonder where this story was going. Yes, this is a love story, but the plot is starting to shift into something I'm not really sure I want. Before anyone wonders, no. I'm not discontinuing the story. That said, I need some advice. I'm thinking of having the next chapter chop out some things in the story, and move on with one idea. Should I continue on the more violent idea of Hawks being a sadist, or go back to the lovey dovey of the beginning of the story? I had recently been going through the comments and one person said they liked the idea of Sadistic Hawks, so I'm tempted to stay on that route, especially since no one has said anything otherwise. I can still include the love story idea, but it's gonna be hella dark. On the other hand, if I go back to the lovey dovey of the beginning of the story, making Hawks a sadist would be kinda difficult, especially since this not being a smut would make things confusing. I mean, why have a sadist without a masochist? Why have them both if the idea isn't expanded on? Anyways, please let me know what you think cause I REALLY NEED HELP!! 😓😓😓
P.S. the photo is from Yuri on Ice if anyone is interested.