Reviewed by Khloe
Story by BlueJay325
Cover
The cover seems intriguing and good, not sure if it goes with the story though.
Description
I like this description. It tells me about the story, it's descriptive and gives me a bit of a cliffhanger. Really good description.
Story
I really like your story and your writing style. it's descriptive but not too descriptive and it's easy to read :)
From me
Sorry that this review is short, i can't find anything bad to point out.
Khloe xo