avneil- neela version

By abhishna

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Neela had a dream about what if Avani had a boy like her and a daughter like Neil......I know everyone knows... More

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chapter 42

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chapter 42

so I am here again.

he dropped Avni to her apartment and she went inside although she was limping. she had asked him not to come as she can manage. obviously ms.i.am.alright. which she was.

she quickly had a shower and was on the bed to sleep until she heard the phone ring.

she just answered it thinking it to be of suns.

Avni- haan sun! i am fine and at the apartment preparing to sleep.see u tomorrow..

but she was interrupted by a rough laughter and soon her demeanor changed from calm person to angry person.

avni-pandit......!!!
(gritting her teeth)

pandit- Haan re maiyich bol rha hai.....kya re bina dekhe hi kahi bhi....ek baar dekh to le kisne phone kiya hai. Teri maa ne nhi sikhaya anjaan logo se dur rehne ko?

avni- meri maa ne to bohot kuch sikhaya hai aur kasam hai mujhe meri maa ki, tujhe to main apne haatho se hadkadi pehnaungi aur ghaseate hue havalat mein dalungi.

pandit- aur kasam hai mujhe khudki ki agle 24 ghante mein maine tujhe rang mahal ki deewaaro ke piche na daala to......ab tera kya hoga re??.....sona mat Avni kyunki tera pala kisi sadak chaap loafer se nhi balki pandit se hua hai!! kya pata kahin hospital mein teri maa ko, Teri Kisi pariwaar wale ko ya phir tere us aashik Neil ke pariwaar ko Kuch ho jaaye.(Avni got shocked, she was sweating badly)

bhaag Avni bhaag kyunki ab tere piche mein hu. pyaar se bola tha samjha nhi na ab meri style ki baari hai.

Avni- kardi na kayaro wali baat......Kaha tha mard to tu hai hi nhi. Kabhi apni maa Ka , Kabhi Kisi ki majboori ka fayda uthakar hi tu pandit bana hai.....arein tere se acche to vo sadak chaap loafer hai at least Apne dum par sab karte hai...na ki teri tarah na mardo wale kaam.

Tu sachi mein insaan hai ya bigi billi??

this was it. he was completely infuriated.

pandit- ayeee!! chup ho jaa aur ye to waqt hi batayega ki kaun mard hai aur kaun na mard. ab to tune khud ki maut ko nyota diya hai. ab to tujhe mein yaha sirf laaunga nhi balki pura video banakar media ko dunga aur to aur tere ghar specially pochaunga. aur barosa rakh isme mujhe sabse jyaada Maza aayega.

teri to ulti ginti shuru.......chal mein phone rakhta hai lekin ab se har ek ghante mein kya hoga vo to tujhe pata bhi nhi hai. police wali hai na chaukana rehna kahi der na ho jaaye.

before Avni could answer he ended the call.

Avni quickly called sun and told her to trace the number.

but now that he has given an open warning to her she can't be at rest.

she quickly asked the security teams to be alert and any stranger activity noticed should be updated to her.

now only one place was left to go and that was hospital.

she quickly changed and went to hospital.

she arrived before an hour . it was still 15mins. she was sweating but then a look at Neela and she was calm.

the power that mother holds can't be replaced by any person.

she sat there silently and started to speak with her. it's said that mother's and children have an unique relation but it got proved when unconscious Neela or to be precise a coma pateint was crying at the plight of her child.

Avni quickly wiped her tears and started blabbering sweet nothings to her and as she got a call from yet another number. she just got alerted and left towards the passage to speak unaware of a nurse going towards neela's ward.

person- are are.....Kitna bhaagi na tu? thak gyi hogi na??lekin sirf yehi batane ko phn Kiya tha ki abhi to khel shuru hua hai. abhi to sirf neela ki baari aayi hai dusre to baaki hai na.....

Avni- kya matlab...neela ki baari???

pandit- ek salah deta hu ye phn rakh aur jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi jaa Neela ke paas warnaa.....

Avni was thoroughly shocked....- Neela ko kya...?
...hello......he..hello
but it was too late and Avni just started to run towards her ward.

she reached there to see a nurse wearing a mask and was trying to remove her oxygen mask.

avni-hey...kaun ho tum?? aur Kar kya rhi ho??

but the nurse by then got alerted and threw the equipment tray towards her face. Avni dogged it but still the edge hit her head and blood oozed out. she too ran behind her alarming the staff but she escaped. Avni then ran towards Neela to check upon her.

she was shivering badly as a thought that because of her Neela would have been ..... she was in fear not for herself but for her near ones.

the hospital staff was alarmed so they quickly gathered in her ward and received a good lecture from her.

the old nurse that tends to Neela gently once everything was over came towards her and applied the medications on her wound.

she thanked her and called sun!!

she was crying but can't become weak. she needed someone to assure her that things will fall in place but no one was there!!

avni-(swallowing the lump) sun!! I need Ur help....jaldi se hospital aaja.

sun was alerted enough by her soft yet pleading voice that something was terribly wrong.

she soon reached hospital.
Avni had her head resting on the bed and she was holding neela's hand as if it would vanish if she didn't held her close.

sun- Avni!!!!

Avni just hugged her tightly and murmured

Avni- I need u to please check the CCTV and find out who the nurse was and I would like to treat her personally so that she won't be able to treat anyone henceforth. please.!! u stay here and arrange a tight security for her. I am going to mehta mansion.

sun just nodded and she left.. although she was tired , limping but how can someone rest when the threats are just life taking.

she was just gonna sit in her car when she got a call. again an unknown number. she quickly answered.

pandit- bal bal bacche...... mujhe na is se jyaada aur Kisi me maza nhi aayega re....... kitna bhagaaya na tereko??.....hahahaha... mein tere aage aur tu mere piche....vo kya kehte hai.....Haan Yaad aaya...too much fun.

avni-(now was loosing it) pandit........ bohot badi galti Kar di hai tune!..... Kaha tha mardo ki tarah saamne aa lekin.....

pandit-shant rehne Ka re ladki.... pressure badh jaayega abhi to kafi logo ko bachana hai re tujhe!! ....Accha chal ab mein tujhe mera next target batata hai....
idhar se theek 1 ghanta lagega tujhe udhar jaate jaate. pohuch gyi to mere dost to Mera salaam warna phir alvida.

and again the phone went dead.

she cursed him to death.

avni-(st) Soch Avni Soch!! jyaada waqt nhi hai...

yaha se 1 ghanta ya to mujhe police station ke liye lagega ya phir........
oh no....! shit

she drove the car like a miniac almost broke the traffic rules it was still 15 mins to complete a hour.she just ran towards the entrance and started to ring the bell.

it was 3at night so all were sleeping but her constant rings alerted all and in no time all gathered in the hall and soon the door was opened.

seeing Avni all were happy except ayesha but then shocked to see her at this time that too panting, sweating and almost gonna cry.

dayawanti- riya paani lao. Aman bitha use. Avni kya hua hai. Tu theek to hai na??

Avni was still catching her breath when she realised that Ashish was not present there.

avni-papa.....papa.....Kaha hai vo(almost gonna cry)

Ketan- bhaiya?? vo honge yahi Kahi shayad Apne room mein. shant bache kya hua hai tujhe??

Avni- papa...she just ran towards his room to check and everyone followed her being shocked at her reaction.

soon she reached towards Ashish and was not in right frame of mind and so she just shook him.

Avni- paa aap theek hai na...please uthiye na.

Ashish woke up immediately and was shocked to see Avni in this disheveled state.

Avni silently thanked God and smiled a bit.but that was it for her.

first her mother and then her entire family. but before she could grab any breath....her phone ranged and she knew this was a call from him.
she answered with her trembling hands. all were shocked to see Avni like that. Ashish was the most in shock. he was maybe having an idea about her sudden this behaviour but his heart wasn't ready to accept that.

Avni-hello!!

pandit- ACP Avni ko pandit ki salaam. kya re tu to vo...super cop nikli re .....dekha kya tere gaurds log ko kaise chain se soo rhe hai........ab ye soch ki agar aaj tu sahi waqt par nhi aayi hoti to.........

Ashish was just alerted by the phn call and before Avni could understand he had grabbed her phone and kept it on speaker.

pandit- vaise tune mera salaam diya ki nhi mere dost cum bhai Ashish ko!? Khair rehne de bohot jald mein bhi milunga us se tab hi de denge!! tujhe ab ek baat batani thi.

dhyaan se sun na!!! aaj to ye sab alag alag waqt hua isiliye tu girti padti bhaagti haafti bachane aa gyi. lekin kal ye nhi hoga.

avni-(overcoming her fear) tune ye theek nhi Kiya hai pandit !! aaj tak meine socha tha ki tu chahe Jo bhi ho lekin ek insaan ki tarah saamne aakar face to face ladhe ga lekin ab tune vo bhi clear Kar hi diya. Tu to gidaag se bhi kayaar nikla re.

mujhe dhamka kar, yu aadhi raat ko bhaga kar tune theek nhi kiya hai. pehle to tujh mein itni himaat thi ki tu mujhe kidnap kare, phir hospital mein meri maa(all were shocked) aur ab mera ghar. ye to tune khud ki hi kabr khod di re.

pandit- kabr kisne kiski khodi hai ye to waqt hi batayega lekin ab dyaan se sun kyunki ab bohot hua ye one on one ab Kuch bada hoga aur theek do ghante hai tere paas rok sake to rok le.........too much fun!!!!!!
hahahahahahah....

Avni- Dekh!..
. but again the call was ended and now she just was tensed....and was going to get up when Ashish held her and hugged her tightly.

Avni- I am sorry paa meri wajah se aap log par bhi khatra aa gya. I tried a lot lekin!!!!!

Ashish- shhhh!!!! calm down and it's ok too cry sometimes as I won't consider that a police officer is always stone hearted.

Ketan- aur hote bhi to humari Avni nhi hai.

Avni was crying not because of her pressure but because she can't let her family in danger.

Ayesha- jab pata hi tha ki danger hai to liya hi kyu?? ab daal diya na sabko khatre mein! barso se yahi karte aayi ho!!

dayawanti-chupp!!! bilkul chup!! Avni ne mujhe bataya tha aur meine hi use haa bola tha.

Ashish- usne tumhe kidnap Kiya tha?(in anger)

Avni-(shivering) haan

Ashish- kab??

Avni- kal raat!!

Ashish- aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nhi???

Avni- batane wali thi lekin subhe ko aur raat ko hi ye sab ho gya......papa I know mujhe bohot kuch explain karna padega but please abhi mere paas waqt bohot kum hai ab use 2 jagah par attack plan Kiya hai lekin vo kya ho sakta hai??...... mujhe jaane dijiye. mein security ko inform kar dungi aur apna dyaan rakhiyega.

she was very tensed and was going when Ashish grabbed her hand and made her sit!!

Ashish- Avni......rockstar shant ho jaa.....vo tumhare emotions ke Saath khelkar tumhe emotionally weak karna Chahta hai. pehle baitho aur socho ab kaunsi jagah baki hai jaha tum aksar jaati ho ya abhi start kiya hai......socho! yu bhaagne se kuch nhi hoga

avni-(calming herself down and thinking) hospital ho gaya, Ghar bhi ho gya , Ali Ka ghar, Neil Ka ghar and police station.
Ali ghar par nhi yaha aa gya hai.....Ali....Ali Kaha hai???

Ashish- Aman??

Aman- vo unko Kuch kaam tha to vo apne ghar gye hai....vohi rukenge!!

Avni- iska matlab ab mujhe ye teen jagah jaana padega!! I don't have time mujhe jaana hoga.

Ashish- Avni tum Neil ke ghar jao, mein Ali ke aur sun ko hum police station bhejte hai.

Avni- nhi aap....aa...aap ghar per hi raho.

Ashish- u can't go all alone when the battle is ours. please let me come.

Avni- no......I can't risk ur life....no

Ashish- u r wasting time let me go we need to asap. please.

Avni now couldn't argue more and left towards Neil's place.

phew!!!! I don't know how was it but I liked writing it down


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