The Love Equation (#2 How I F...

By shysunflower

209K 3.3K 8.5K

"I guess I like Foster better than you," he remarked. "In some ways, I'm sure you do."Fitz muttered lowly. S... More

Back to Foxfire
Just an Average Day at Work
Sabotage
Sophie Slippy Slide Foster
Keefe's Spectacular Window Adventure
Uh-Oh
Getting Revenge
A trip to a football game
The Narrative of Sophie Foster
The Narrative of Sophie Foster pt. 2
The Narrative of Keefe Scencen
Halloween
AN
Amnesia mix up
Christmas Movie Marathon
Christmas Eve
New Year's Eve
Back to School
Math Mishap
Pranks
Valentine's Day
Aftermath
Debate Drama
Vacker Drama
The birth of a club
A/N
A/N: Legacy
A date
The Stina Hex
Date Disaster
Principal Alina
Beginning of the End
The Purge (no, not the movie. Totally unrelated)
Farewell, Keefe
New Books!

AN: I finished Flashback

5.3K 60 170
By shysunflower

Okay, I'm about to rant about Flashback. 

There will be major spoilers as I pour out my unbeating heart. 

Turn back if you haven't read Flashback yet 

You've been warned 

*** 



Where do I even begin? 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So Flashback happened. I'm still in shock. Obviously. 

First of all, I was a little annoyed that Sophie was incapacitated for about 400 PAGES! Seriously, it was sad. Of course, Shannon Messenger probably has her reasons, and us peasant readers shouldn't complain. I mean, I doubt I could write that much without it becoming super boring. 

Yeah. But now for what really killed me. 

Sophitz.

Or as they named it in the book: Fitzphie. For some reason I prefer Sophitz, but whatever. 

Something about me: I'm pretty go with the flow. If something doesn't work out, I'm like, "that's okay, it's cool." 

But not in this case. 

Throughout the Keeper series, I've shipped Sokeefe, but I wasn't a Fitz hater. If she ended up with him, it wasn't going to be the end of the world for me, I'd just be a little depressed. 

But after reading Flashback, I'm convinced Sophitz would kill me if it ended up like this. I mean, it was just so awkward when they got together. I guess this subject is awkward, but it was too perfect for me. Maybe that's just me lol. 

Seriously, when they figured out that Sophie's device was blocking the signal and Fitz got all angry at Sophie, I was triggered. He totally turned on her, when nobody knew it would have that effect.  

But then Keefe stepped in to save Sophie from being accused. And Keefe calmed Fitz down and comforted Sophie. I SHIP IT SO HARD!!! 

The thing that irked me was the whole thing with Fitz almost murdering Alvar. Not only because he nearly killed him in cold blood twice, but also because he wasn't the least bit guilty. He was like: 

Fitz: I stopped trying to save my brother from dying a horrible death. I stopped pushing the buttons. 

Sophie: Oh

Fitz: Does this make me a bad person? 

Sophie: Of course not! 

Me: *facial spasm* YES IT DOES FITZ! YOU JUST TRIED TO KILL YOUR BROTHER AND YOU HAVE NO REMORSE! *looks up symptoms* 

Me: Fitz, you may be a psychopath 

Okay, so Fitz isn't a psychopath, but he still creeped me out in that last scene. 

What are your guys' thoughts?

Continue Reading

You'll Also Like

255K 3.5K 43
Keefe wakes up from a long coma in order to regain strength. Dex is stronger then him, zero muscle Dex! Struggling to lift weights is one thing, stru...
41K 128 34
Sophie Foster has fallen in love with Keefe Sencen. Fitz is not happy about this relationship at all and goes all out to make Sophie love him. Who wi...
69.5K 362 40
Sophie's heart gets broken on her 2nd anniversary. Not long later she starts dating again only to be let down. Then a blonde boy makes his way into h...
30.4K 356 24
enjoy these poorly written, cringy reader inserts! i wrote these a while back when i somewhat cared for the series. i wrote how much i hated sokeefe...