Heartbreak Hotel (Editing)

By ANTMBi

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It stands on the east side of 57th avenue. Sitting on the corner to be exact. Heartbreak hotel is. club where... More

Heartbreak Hotel (Michael & Aaliyah)
Aj's Journal
Chapter 1
Chapter 2: The Heartbreak Hotel
Aj's Journal
Chapter 3: Changes
Chapter 4: I Will Be
Chapter 5
Chapter 6: Let Me Go
Aj's Journal
Chapter 7: Innocence
Chapter 8: Faceless Enemy
Chapter 9: Remember Everything
Chapter 10: Closed Door to Open Windows.
Aj's Journal
Chapter 11: Anthem Of The Angels
Part Two: Chapter 12
Chapter 13: Smile
Aj's Journal
Chapter 14: Promise
Chapter 15 (Part 1)
Chapter 15: Life After You (Part 2)
Chapter 16: Romeo and Juliet
Chapter 17: What Leena Wants, Leena Gets
Chapter 18: A Flower For The Rain
Aj's Journal
Chapter 19: Careless Feelings
Chapter 20: Leave Them Hanging
Aj's Journal
Chapter 21: Conditions
Chapter 22: Decisions
Chapter 23: Unofficial Fiancé
Chapter 24: Dimps
Chapter 25: Memories
Chapter 26: Promise Ring
Aj's Journal
Chapter 27: Big Girl's Don't Cry
Aj's Journal
Chapter 28: Complications
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Chapter 29: All Or Nothing
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Aj's Journal
Part Three, Chapter 30: The Ghost Of You
Chapter 31: Ropes
Chapter 32: Silenced Voices
Chapter 33: Friendly Animals
Chapter 34: Lovers and Friends
Chapter 35: Tainted
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 36: Memory Dreams
Chapter 37: Genius
Chapter 38: Unanswered Questions
Chapter 39: No Heart, No Emotion
Chapter 40: Frozen
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 41: I Don't Wanna Hurt Anymore
Chapter 42: Sisterhood
Chapter 43: No Regrets
Chapter 44: Love Is...
Chapter 45: Mistress
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 46: Losing You
Chapter 47: Stunned
Chapter 48: Lust
Chapter 49: Love Never Felt So Good
Chapter 51: Hurt
Chapter 52: Seventy Times Seven
Chapter 52: Only Guy (Part 2)
Chapter 53: Aj vs. Liyah
Chapter 54: Ring of Fire
Chapter 55: Evanescing Into Nothingness
Chapter 56: Scared of Lonely
Chapter 57: It Won't Stop
Chapter 58: Black Eyes
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 59: Disappearing Thoughts
Chapter 60: Pretty Hurts
Chapter 61: Black Mailing Demon
Chapter 62:Too Little Too Late
Chapter 63: Walking Away
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 64: Death In Her Eyes
Chapter 65: Open Wounds
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 66: Suicide
Chapter 67: Blood Sucking Leeches
Chapter 68: Roots
Chapter 69: Sound Of Madness
Chapter 70: Endless Love
Chapter 71: We Belong Together
Chapter 72: Letting Go
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 73: Betrayals
Chapter 74: I Need You...You Need Me
Chapter 75: Powerless
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 76: Some Men Are Born Great...
Chapter 77: Running
Chapter 78: Sober
Chapter 79: Nobody Knows
Chapter 80: Lay It All To Rest
Chapter 81: Good Mother... Bad Mother
Chapter 82:The Award Of Merit
Chapter 82, Part 2: I Love You, Liyah!
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 83: Swimming Through Ashes
Chapter 84: Caring For The Uncaring
Chapter 85: In A Darkened Room
Chapter 86: Respect
Chapter 87:Burning Desire
Chapter 88: No Angel
Chapter 89: Threatening Chance
Chapter 90: Silence
Chapter 91: Crowd Of Chaos
Chapter 92: Tough Love
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 93: Betrayed
Chapter 94: Trouble's Ahead
Chapter 95: Fed Up
Chapter 96: Old Habits
Chapter 97: Faint Whispers
Chapter 98: Expressionless
Chapter 99: Try
Chapter 100: Road To Happiness
Liyah's Journal
Chapter 101: Take Caution When It Comes To Love
Chapter 102: The Pretender
Chapter 103: Tales of Two Black Sheep
Chapter 104: Breakdown
Chapter 105: Blood Red Roses (Final Chapter)
Heartbreak Hotel: This Place Hotel

Chapter 50: Deranged

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By ANTMBi

Leena's POV

Never have I ever been to a club or a disco and not have fun at all. I loved partying. I loved the heat of a dance floor. I loved the aroma of body sweat that rose from the surface of my skin and those around me. I loved holding my drink up high while I danced with total strangers. I loved drinking and watching night club fights. That was the kinda thing I lived for.

Tonight was different. Tonight I sat at the bar with my fingers rested upon temples as I tried to rub away the frustration and the headache that I had slowly developing within. Frustration that came from De who was standing up on the bar dancing like she had lost her damn mind. I couldn't figure out what was wrong with her. It was like went to bed one night and woke up a completely different person.

"Oh, yeah! This is my song!" She was holding a huge bottle of liquor in her hand while she danced. Every now and then she would stop and drink then she would go right back to what she was doing. Everyone was looking at her like she was a lunatic and I just sat there hoping that she doesn't call me out. Like that would actually help. We were recognized  by a lot of people and had only been there for a couple of hours. "C'mon De! Come dance with me!!!"

I looked up at her while she was still dancing and shaking her hips like crazy."De, get yo crazy ass down from there!"

She began spinning around spilling some of alcohol on the bar counter top. "No....no..." she said, pushing the word into one long syllable. "I'm on space boots! Space boots, space boots, space boots...."

I stood up from my stool and places my hands on my hips. She was still dancing, swinging her hair from side to side a.d screaming 'space boots' at the top of her lungs. "I'm on my space boots!!!" She screamed.

"De get down! Get down before you get in trouble!"

She stopped, squatting down in from of me. She was out of breath trying to catch it as she spoke to me. "Nope....because....I still ...have.....my...SPACE BOOTS!" She chugged down more liquor before standing back up and dancing to a rock song by Metallica. She didn't even like rock music. Jojo and Liyah were the ones who liked rock music out of all of us. She was head banging. Swinging her long hair every hair. "I got my space boots, space boots, space boots....."

"Denise!!" I yelled.

"What, Leena?" She laughed.

"Get down!"

"No! I'm not getting off my space boots, space boots, space boots....."

"Look, De for get about yo damn space boots! Get yo ass down now!" I yelled. Sounding much like a mother.

"No!"

I was starting to get pissed now she was just beginning to act an ass. "Get down, De!"

"I'm still on my space boots..." She teased. "Na na, nana, naaaa, naa! You can't get me." She was actually dancing like a little six year old. "I'm still dancin' on the bar!" She sung while she shook her hips. "Na nana, boo boo! You can't get me!"

"Denise!!!"

She started dancing around circles singing and mocking me. I began to wonder why I even agreed to going to a club with her. She was acting like she was mentally insane.

"De stop!" I ordered.

She stopped dancing immediately. I thought she was going to get down but her attention was stole by something else. Her smile had faded into an agonizing glare. "Oh, fuck no! WAYNE"

"Wayne?" Wayne wasn't even there. Was he?

"Wayne! I know you did not bring that trick up in here!" She began walking all around the bar. Kicking over people's drinks in her seven inched heels. "Wayne! What the fuck are you doing?"

"De! God, girl calm down." I began following her on the floor. "De!"

"You always disrespecting me! Why you gone take her here but anytime I want to go somewhere you say no. You always wanna get high...and drunk...." she stopped in front of the guy who wasn't even Wayne. He didn't even look like him. Shit, he wasn't even tall enough to be him. "Why you disrespectin' me?"

"De that's not Wayne! Get off the bar!"

"Is she talking to me?" The guy asked me.

I sighed and shook my head. "I'm so sorry, she's...drunk."

He chuckled.

"Wayne! Why you keep disrespecting me? Why?"

At that moment club security came over to her. Both tall black men with broad shoulders and dressed I'm black from head to toe. "Ma'am I'm gonna need you to get off the bar please."

De's eyes fell on them with threats running through them.

Then the bar manager showed up from the back and stared up at De with her eyes furrowed. " Lady the bar's closin' imma need you to give me that back." He said, his green eyes glowed in the dimmed light. He was eyeing the bottle of liquor she had.

"No, I paid for this bottle, you ain't gettin' it back!"

"Ma'am I'm gonna ask you one more time to get down from there now! Or we will have to escort you out."

"No, you don't own me! I'll get down when I want to!"

"No you will get your ass down now!" He yelled as he stepped between the guy and the girl who sitting to him grabbed her arm.

Everyone in the club their attention on De. A lot of people was whispering. Others was snapping pictures. I heard someone whispering ' Ain't that one of the girls Promise?' I knew there was no way this won't end up in the media."No!" She yelled. As she tried fighting him off. " I ain't comin' down! Get yo fucking hands off of me!" She said as she lifted her other hand that held the bottle. "You don't touch me!" She yelled. I watched as her arm swung forward in a swift motion and the bottle smashed right into his balled head. Glass and alcohol was going every where. Shattering to the floor.

I heard screams coming from the gathering crowd and De...well she just stood there still throwing glass and cups at him. The other security guard finally took action he grabbed her by the waist and took her off the bar. " Put me down! Put me down or i swear i find somebody to fuck you up. Put me down!" She screamed. She was kicking and squirming in her arms. "Imma fuck you up!"

"Call back up!" The one who was hit by the bottle said into his walkie talkie. "We got a deranged one on our hands."

I stood frozen in an oblivion. "Awww....shit...." I knew this wasn't good.

Liyah's POV

Our breath was stolen by each other as we laid with our hot bodies slowly rubbing together. My legs were already numb and my body was already shaking. Our lips were moving together in synchronization. He started trialling his kisses all over my face, kissing my cheek and my jawline. He lifted my face up slowly to kiss underneath my jawline while continued to rub his smooth back softly. The room was dark, as usual and I couldn't see much of what he was he doing to me. There was only enough light from the window to see our bodies close together. I could only feel it. That's the way I liked it. It was better to be surprised than to know exactly what he's going to do before he does it.  That's the way I felt about it. " You think may be we should...take a break?"he whispered in my ear before kissing my neck tenderly.

I smiled. "That's up to you. You're the one who can't stop kissing."

He pecked me on the lips. " Round two?"

"I don't know referee." I said, sarcastically.

"Stop being sarcastic."

I lifted my head from the pillows to try and kiss him on his neck but he moved my face back up to his. He kissed my nose. "What's wrong?" I asked.

"What you mean?"

"You wont let me kiss your neck." I tried to kiss again but he just dipped his head to kiss mine again. " What's wrong?" I laughed. It was like he didn't want me to kiss him. The right side of his neck in particular.

He only stared at me for a moment then he smiled. " Nothing, I just want you to not worry about me and just relax, okay?"

"Relax?" I asked, confusingly. "What if I don't want to relax. What if I just want to love you the way you love me?"

"We have plenty of time to do that, girl." He said as he felt around under the sheets for my leg. He pulled it up slowly and began rubbing the back of my thigh.

I raised my eyebrow. " Do we really?"

" You're so cute." He said with a chuckle. I watched those big brown eyes stare at me with love in them. I ran my my thumb across his sharp cheek bones and down his perfectly squad jawline letting it lead up to his lips. I began caressing the bottom which caused a smile to spread across my face. I liked the way it felt against  my thumb.

"Round two is all mine." I whispered as I stared at his lips. I looked at him biting my lip; giving him a penetrating look. "I said you were all mine earlier, and I meant that." I said in a conspiratorial voice.

He laughed and flipped me on top of him, causing me to moan softly. I had forgotten that he was still inside of me."I'm yours then."

I smiled at him and kissed his lips again, pulling the covers over our heads. I found his neck and began giving soft butterfly kisses all over it just to be sure he wouldn't stop me like the times before. He didn't. I listened as his breath became unleveled. I began moving myself slowly on him causing his breath to become heavier. He began grabbing my hips and pulling me closer to him. Just as I was about to make love to him just like he had for an hour straight the phone started ringing.

I stopped kissing him but didn't pull my lips away from his. I decided that I was just going ignore it and let it ring until who ever it was hung up, but it just kept ringing. "Just get it.." he breathed. " Tell who ever it is you're busy."

I looked down at him." You sure?"

" It ain't gonna stop if you don't."

I groaned." This better be worth my time." I growled through my teeth. I pulled the blanket from over our heads. I reached over him to take the phone off the hook. "Hello?" I said it with so much attitude that I didn't even care to feel guilty about it.

"Liyah, it's me."

"Leena?"

"Yeah."

"What do you want?"

"I need you come and pick me up from a club?"

My eyebrows frowned with confusion."For what exactly...?" I asked suspiciously.

" I came here with De and I don't have a way to get there."

"Well, where is she?"

The line went quiet for moment. All I could hear was her breathing and the sound of cars zooming by her. I assumed she was on a pay phone. " De got arrested."

My eyes widened." What? How?" I asked as I climbed off of Michael.

"What's wrong, Dimps?" I held up one finger with the same hand I was using to cover my chest up with.

"The girl done lost her damn mind!" She shrieked. "I mean, for real! The girl was drunk as hell! She was dancing on to of the bar and talking about space boots and shit, and then I don't know what happened, but she thought she saw Wayne talking to some chic and Wayne wasn't even there, the guys was just total stranger. She kept yellin' at him and everything! Then the security came telling her to get down and she hit one of them in the head with a liquor bottle...." my mouth was dropping slowly as she continued to tell me what had happened. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. "They gone make her spend the night in jail to sleep the alcohol off, and then they will talk about charges tomorrow morning."

I ran my fingers through my hair. " God, what's wrong with that girl?" I asked myself.

" I don't know...but can we talk about this later? Its cold out here."

I rolled my eyes." What club are you at?"

"Wine & Dine." She said.

"Okay I'm on my way, just let me get dressed."

"Dressed?"She asked, her voice filled with curiosity. " What are you doing?"

"You should already know the answer to that." I laughed.

"Mmmhmmm.....You're with Michael, aren't you?"

"Yes, as a matter of fact I am and you owe me one for this."

"Whatever, just come and get me before I freeze my ass off."

"Okay. I'll be there." I assured her.

When she hung up. I buried my face in my hands to try and calm myself. At the moment I didn't know what to think of what Leena had told me. I didn't know how to feel about it neither. I was numb it it. I was numb to everything that would've left any normal human being would hurt, angry, shocked, confused. I was just...out of it.

I felt Michael's large arms around my naked shoulders. He pulled me me into his arms allowing both of our bodies to fall back into the sheets. "What's wrong now?"

"I have to go get Leena." I said aster a moment of silence.

He began brushing his finger tips up and down my shoulder. "From where?" He asked as he missed my shoulder tenderly.

" A club, not too far from here."

"Why do you have to pick her up? he asked as he removed some hair from my neck area. I knew was trying to make feel better and on top of that he trying to butter me up so I can tell him what was really bothering me.

" Why?" He asked before planting a kiss on my shoulder blade and behind my ear.

"She needs a ride."

He pressed his mouth against my ear causing me to quiver."Why?" His breath made goose bumps rise on my neck.

"She was with De and she got arrested."

He immediately stopped kissing me. "How?"

"I have no time to explain," I said as I pulled away from him. "Are you coming?"

"Uh-yes, as long as you tell me what's going on between the two of you."

"Who?"

"You and De."

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