Still Dawn: The Saga Continues

By SusanSuziMcClean

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My interpretation of what COULD happen after breaking dawn, I own nothing, Stephenie Meyer owns it all, Any... More

Chapter 1: Proposal
still dawn chapter 2
chapter 3 - SCHOOL
CHAPTER 4: SCHOOL (EPOV)
CHAPTER 5: CHAOS AT SCHOOL
chapter 6: the call
Chapter 7: Renesmee's Plight
chapter 8, the talk (RPOV)
Chapter 9, Billy
Chapter 10, You should've called
Chapter 11: Meet Our Daughter
Chapter 12, The Funeral
Chapter 13: Saying Good-Bye
Chapter 14, the truth hurts
Chapter 15, Relationships (JPOV)
Chapter 16: Roses
Chapter 17: Shopping
Chapter 18: Maid of Honour
Chapter 19, tom
Chapter 20, time to play
Chapter 21, Proper Mom
chapter 22 guard dog
Chapter 23, tight squeeze
Chapter 24: Christmas (EmPOV)
chapter 25, presents
Chapter 26, Happy New year ...Yeah Right
chapter 27, they're here
Chapter 28, Ceremony
chapter 29, confrontations
Chapter 30, best gift
chapter 32, suprise
chapter 33, henry, rpov
chapter 34, explanations
chapter 35, gone
chapter 36, unexpected
CHAPTER 37, LIES
CHAPTER 38, PLEASE
chapter 39, resolve
Chapter 40, Reunited (RPOV)
chapter 41, whole again
chapter 42, All Grown
chapter 43, my girl (jpov)
chapter 44 take a chance edited
chapter 45, no other option
chapter 46, choices
chapter 47, movies
chapter 48, no way (epov)
chapter 49, too young
chapter 50, really? (rpov)
Chapter 51: Response (Jacobs POV)
Chapter 52, waiting
chapter 53, surreal
Chapter 54. H.E.L.P
Chapter 55: Missing
Chapter 56: Denali
Chapter 57: New Family
Chapter 58: Nothing
Chapter 59: Nevaeh
Chapter 60: My Jacob
Chapter 61: Clues
Chapter 62: Rosalie
Chapter 63: Protective
Chapter 64: Dark (Renesmee POV)
Chapter 65: Alistair
Chapter 66: Volturi
Chapter 67: Italy
Chapter 68: Volterra
Chapter 69: Ultionis
Chapter 70: Sacrifices
Chapter 71: Returned
Chapter 72: Skeptical
Chapter 73: Revelations
Chapter 74: New 'Do
Chapter 75: Another Year
The Final Word

Chapter 31, Almost perfect (epov)

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By SusanSuziMcClean

[A/N: Hey Guy's!! I just want to say a HUGE thank-you to each and every one of you who have taken the time to follow this story so far. I never for a minute thought that this would become as popular as it has, I have had some truly heart-warming comment's from you all. The support is overwhelming and it amaze's me each and every time I log in to see how many of you are following this! I started writing this as a mere hobby, something to pass the time, but over the last few week's it is something I have become passionate about, and I haven't felt this way about anything in a long time. So once again, THANK-YOU, you are all amazing! Not only have you played a part in restoring my faith in people again, but you have given me the courage and strength to carry on writing!!]

CHAPTER 31: ALMOST PERFECT (Edward's POV)

"Throw it Mom!" Renesmee sang, standing amongst the group of women who were now crowded behind my Bella. They were waiting for her to throw her bouquet and were begining to get impatient. Women and their tradition's, something I'll never understand, even if I do live until the end of time. Today had been perfect, Bella had looked truly ... well there was no word's to describe how utterly, heartbreakingly beautiful she had looked. If had not been for Tanya and her malicious meddling, then today would have easily topped our first wedding. But Tanya had meddled, and as a result the Volturi were more eager to defeat us now than they had ever been. I had not told Bella this of course, actually I had not told anyone what I had heard. Everyone had been so caught up in the wedding that they hadn't thought to ask. Carlisle had contemplated asking once or twice, before deciding he didn't want to be responsible for ruining our day any more than it already had been.

"Well done sweetheart" Bella cheered, snatching me back from my thoughts. I glimpsed to see Renesmee now clutching the bouquet Bella had just thrown. 'Man, does this mean something?' Jacob thought, I turned slightly and caught his eye. He must have realised I heard him because he instantly began reciting the alphabet. Seth was nudging him suggestively and laughing, while Jacob tried to keep the sheer joy he was feeling from showing on his face. My mind instantly recalled the conversation between Bella and myself after I told her that Jacob had collected his mother's ring from his late father's house. Bella briefly threw me a worried glance over her shoulder, letting me know that she was thinking the same as me. I pasted a smile back on my face and stepped forward, wrapping my arm around my wife's waist as I did,  

"We really must leave now" I said, addressing not only Bella, but the entire room.  

"Yeah, sure" Bella agreed, reaching out to pull our daughter close to her. "You be good" she whispered into her hair.  

"I will Mom" Ness promised, hugging her back. Nessie turned to me next, "Have a nice time Dad" she smiled, jumping up into my arm's,  

"We will darling" I assured her, wrapping my arm's around her as tight as possible. The longest we had ever been away from Renesmee was 2 night's. I had wanted to bring her with us, but Bella had rightly argued that we deserved this time alone and that she would be perfectly safe at home with the family. Still, I was going to miss her desperately. But we were only going for a week, what could possibly go wrong in a week? Well, in this family, plenty. But I wasn't going to focus on that right now.  

"Dad, you can let go now" Nessie giggled into my ear. I smiled widely, holding her for a moment more, before setting her back down on her feet. She danced back over and stood next to Esme and Carlisle while me and Bella said our good-bye's to the rest of our family and friend's. We quickly began to make our way around the group standing before us.

"Keep an eye on the dog" I whispered jokingly in Rosalie's ear as she stepped forward to bid me farewell.  

"Already on it" she winked as she turned to speak with Bella. I smiled briefly to myself, and turned toward's two of the only people left to speak with,  

"Look after her" Charlie said, extending his hand for me to shake,  

"I will protect her with my life" I swore, taking his hand in mine. "and thank you for trusting me today" I nodded. It hadn't been easy for me to get Charlie here today, and it had been even harder to keep it from Bella. Me and Charlie had never had the easiest of relationship's, if you could even call it that. He still found it hard to forget the time I had left Bella, and the hurt that I had caused her. But I knew from his thought's that he was making progress with that, and it had been true what he'd said in his letter. He did see how happy I made her. Charlie nodded at me and stepped back to take Sue's hand,  

"Congratulation's Edward" Sue smiled at me.  

"Thank you Sue" I smiled "and thank you again for coming today"

The last people I had to bid farewell to were my parent's, Carlisle and Esme.  

"We are so proud of you son" Carlisle began, holding his hand out for me to take. I ignored his gesture and stepped forward wrapping my parent's in a cold, and yet somehow warm, embrace.  

"I love you both" I told them, stepping away again.  

"We love you too dear" Esme smiled proudly, taking Carlisle's hand, the smile remaining a permanent fixture upon her face. It wasn't often that our family exchanged such affection's, but this seemed like the right occasion to show them how much I care, and how grateful I am to them both. I gave them a wide smile before beginning to turn away from them. 'Edward?' Carlisle called silently in his mind, gaining my attention once more 'Do we have anything to be worried about?' I allowed my mind to flit back to what Aro had thought earlier today,

'They will pay for this, one day. I don't know how yet, but they will'

"No" I shook my head, turning back to face him "Not now anyway"  

"Good" Carlisle nodded, looking relieved "have a wonderful time won't you?"  

"Of course" I smiled, turning away and heading back toward's my wife who was sharing a heart felt good bye with her father,  

"I love you Dad" she smiled, wrapping her arm's around him.  

"You too Bell's. Always" he told her "Come visit soon yeah?" he paused "All of you" even without hearing his thought's I could tell he meant it.  

"As soon as we can" Bella promised, turning away to hug Sue "Thank's Sue, and look after him won't you?" she laughed  

"Of course. And congratulation's, both of you" she added, as I reached Bella's side  

"Thank's Sue" my wife smiled.  

"Bella love, we really do have to go or we'll never make our flight" I urged, reaching out for her hand, which she willingly took without hesitation. It never failed to shock me how accepting Bella was of my word, right from day one. I cringed slightly at the memory of us together the day she figured out what I was, and how, despite my best effort's to put her off, she had refused to doubt me.  

"Bye everyone!" she called, as we headed toward's the front door, under a cloud of rice and confetti, which somehow managed to follow us all the way to the car that was waiting outside.

We got into the front seat's of our Volvo and waved enthusiastically out the window at our family and friend's who were now stood on the front porch to see us off. Once we rounded the corner Bella sat back in her seat and sighed happily,  

"Are you alright love?" I asked  

"Fine" she smiled "I'm just thinking"  

"About?"  

"Today" she sighed peacefully, "and how almost perfect it was"

We got to the airport with only 20 minute's to spare before our plane began boarding. We would be flying to Miami before catching our connection to Rio de Janeiro. We were of course going back to Isle Esme, only this time we wouldn't have to be careful, and we wouldn't be interrupted by cleaning staff. I had also thought, considering human memories fade, that Bella might like to experience the Island as an immortal. So she would be able to remember it forever.  

"So" Bella began "can I at least guess where we are going?"  

"Sure" I smiled, certain that she wouldn't guess correctly, All the family knew where we were going, but I had kept it from Bella, I had wanted her to be pleased when she saw it from her new perspective,  

"Well" she grinned "it wouldn't be Isle Esme would it?" I was stunned, I had never thought she would have worked it out. A smile graced her beautiful lip's. She hadn't figured it out,  

"Who told you?" I asked, letting out an exasperated sigh,  

"Ness" she laughed "You should really know better than to tell her thing's, she doesn't keep any secret's from her Mom"

After a 21 hour journey we finally stepped off the boat and onto the island, I watched as the smile on Bella's face grew wider,  

"It's even better than I remembered" she exclaimed, taking in the view.  

Just like I had thought.

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