Yuffie's Writing How-To's

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Author's Note
How to make a MEMORABLE PROTAGONIST
How to do WORLD BUILDING
How to write ROMANCE
How to write PHYSICAL FIGHTS/WEAPONS
How to SHOW vs. TELL & DESCRIPTION
How to tackle LGBTQ themes
This deserves a chapter all for itself.
How to STICK WITH A STORY
How to write VILLAINS
How to be a WRITER
How to write CLICHES
Awesome Quotes
How to START THE STORY
How to create a CAST OF CHARACTERS
How to (not) CHEAT THE NARRATION
How to make your stories REALISTIC
How to choose POINT OF VIEW and TENSE
How to write POETRY (Guest speaker!)
How to write BACKSTORY
How to create THREE-DIMENSIONAL CHARACTERS
Something every aspiring author needs to read
How to make NON-CLICHE VILLAINS
How to CREATE A PLOT
How to write DIALOGUE
How to write BADBOYS AND BADASSES
How to NAME YOUR CHARACTERS
How to make COVERS
How to overcome PLOTBLOCK
How to write ROMANCE pt. II
How to write a STORY BLURB/QUERY
How to choose a STORY TITLE
How to make a LIKABLE CHARACTER (pt. 1)
How to make a LIKABLE CHARACTER (pt. 2)
How to make a LIKEABLE CHARACTER (pt. 3)
How to write REAL WORLD SETTINGS
How to WRITE STORY NOTES
How to make your CHARACTERS CHANGE
How to create 3D CHARACTERS (pt. 2)
How to write THE HERO'S JOURNEY
How to manipulate SENTENCE STRUCTURES
Why Romeo and Juliet is a SATIRE, not a romance!
How to portray DEPRESSION
How to write DEEP POV
The Most Important Rule of Writing
How to write ORGANIC PROSE
How to create a CALENDAR
How to GET OUT OF A WRITING SLUMP
How to Write ROMANCE SCENES
Bringing out the wet fish again.
WHAT IS LOVE?
Need Constructive Criticism?
This needs to be repeated.
Do You Have the Fire to be a WRITER?
How to COME UP WITH IDEAS
How to make your VILLAIN COMPLEMENT THE HERO
How to INJURE THE HUMAN BODY
What is a FLAW?
How to write HEALTHY vs. UNHEALTHY RELATIONSHIPS
How to ADD PLOT TWISTS
How to find the MEAT OF YOUR PLOT
How to PLOT
How to ORGANIZE YOUR SCENES
How to CRITIQUE
More on FIRST CHAPTERS
How to KEEP YOUR WRITING FOCUSED
How to use SEMICOLONS
How to SHOW EMOTIONS
How to SHOW EMOTIONAL STATES
How to create an EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER
How to IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY
How to BATTLE STEREOTYPES
How-To Mini Series: Movies to Books
Movies to Books: Warm Bodies
This is LOVE
How to REDUCE # OF SUPPORTING CHARACTERS
How to TURN OFF YOUR INNER EDITOR
How to DETAIL
How to write LOVE TRIANGLES
How to write SUBTLE ROMANCE
How to write HEROIC TRAITS AND THEIR FAULTS
How to write PIRATES
How to use BODY LANGUAGE
The VISUAL DICTIONARY
Movies to Books: Pacific Rim
How to be MORE CRITICAL OF WRITING
TV to Books: Avatar: The Last Airbender
How to create SUPERSTITIONS
TV to Books: Attack on Titan
Incredible Inspiration
The Power of Predictions!
College majors
How to write good shit.
A Reminder
How to create CONTINUITY
How to write the INCITING INCIDENT
How people turn EVIL
BACKGROUND NOISE
TV to Books: Arrow
How to DESCRIBE TOUCH
On posting writing online
How to WIPE OUT HUMANITY
121 Cliched Dialogues
How to PLOT pt. 2
TV to Books: Once Upon a Time
On ORIGINAL VISIONS for your story
Romantic Dynamics
Movies to Books: Frozen
Movies to Books: Thor: The Dark World
How to write a KILLER THRILLER
If you're stuck...
How to write KIDNAPPER ROMANCES
Movies to Books: Frozen (pt. 2)
How to differentiate the ____PUNK GENRES (Guest speaker!)
Should you write in order or skip around?
How to write BIG AGE GAPS
How to SYMPATHIZE WITH THE DEAD
The Bechdel Test
How to END YOUR NOVEL
How to write PLATONIC LOVE
How to write FEMALE VILLAINS
How to make your plot more COMPELLING
How to write a COMIC RELIEF CHARACTER
Things that REALLY BUG ME
How to make your character HEROIC
How to add a DEADLINE
Got a cool idea for a story? Now break it.
Anti-procrastination websites
How to be MORE CRITICAL OF WRITING Pt. II
How to write TIMESKIPS
Basic Checklist for Your Story
Thoughts on (lack of) conflict
How to TIGHTEN YOUR WRITING
How to write ACCENTS AND DIALECTS
How to make a DEATH SADDER
On Writing: UNASKED QUESTIONS
How to write SACRIFICES
How to make your CHARACTERS RELATABLE
How to write THE CHOSEN ONE & PROPHECIES
Brandon Sanderson's Lectures on Writing!
How to write STRONG FEMALES
More on Filtering!
Why we need DIVERSITY
How to write DIVERSITY -- ADDENDUM
TV to Books: Legend of Korra
How to write FOILS
BACK UP YOUR WRITING
How to RESEARCH
How to vary SENTENCE LENGTHS
How NOT to be MYSTERIOUS
How to write MAGIC SYSTEMS
How to write Mentor/Mentee tropes
How to KILL OFF A CHARACTER
Sympathy Without Saintliness
My Story Litmus Test
How to MAKE YOUR CHARACTERS DIFFERENT
How to AVOID ROMANTICIZING BAD THINGS
How to come up with MOTIVATIONS
How to create CHARACTER GROWTH (TV to Books: ATLA pt. 2)
Movies to Books: Big Hero 6
Sexism in Literature
How to write VILLAINS (pt. 2)
How to write MENTALLY DISORDERED VILLAINS - Guest Lecturer: Mo!
How to write VILLAINS (pt. 3) - Guest lecturer: Mo!
How to write NON-OFFENSIVE THINGS
How to write UNHEALTHY RELATIONSHIPS
How to write UNHEALTHY RELATIONSHIPS - ADDENDUM
How to write a ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE
How to write ROMANCE SCENES (pt. 2)
How to PUT IT ALL TOGETHER
How to avoid the WOMAN IN REFRIGERATOR TROPE
How to REVISE YOUR STORY
How to CHOOSE YOUR PROTAGONIST
On WRITING GENRES
How to add in SUBPLOTS
How to write a SERIES
How to TURN A BAD CHARACTER GOOD
How to decide on CHAPTER LENGTHS
Internet to Books: TWITCH PLAYS POKEMON
How to do WORLDBUILDING - pt. 2
How to OUTLINE YOUR NOVEL
How to write BACKSTORIES -- pt. 2
More INSPIRATION for you!
Writing Masterpost
Narcissism in Today's Fiction?
Evidence that this guide means nothing
Trailers to Books: Black Widow
How to write INTENSE EMOTIONS
How to FALL FOR THE ENEMY
Topic Suggestions
How to structure PLOT and PACING
My beef with BEAUTIFUL CHARACTERS
Why characters act ILLOGICALLY
How to write HARD vs. SOFT MAGIC
How to MAKE YOUR OWN WRITING PROMPTS
How to write FANTASY LANGUAGES
#distractinglysexy
I don't understand arranged marriage stories
How to add SUSPENSE
Why you should READ OUT OF YOUR GENRE
More on BAD BOYS
How to write DIVERSITY pt. 2
How to write RACE IN FANTASY
Chuck Wendig, Ladies and Gentlemen
How to write UNRELIABLE NARRATORS
How to GET POPULAR ON WATTPAD
How to write MORAL DILEMMAS
How to structure PLOT AND PACING pt. 2
How to INCREASE READING SPEED
Is GETTING THE GIRL SEXIST?
How to write a WAR
REISSUE: How to make your work ORIGINAL vs. FANFICTION
How to CLEAN UP YOUR WRITING
How to find your CHARACTER'S VOICE pt. 2
Movies to Books: Cinderella (1950)
How to Plot pt. 3
Why The Hunger Games fails at worldbuilding
How to READ LIKE A WRITER
On SELF-INSERTION CHARACTERS
Uhh.... WHAT?!!???!?!?!?
The Role of Women
How to write the OPPOSITE GENDER'S POV
SELF-PUBLISHING & How to PUBLISH YOUR FANFICTION
Parting Words

How to DESCRIBE CHARACTERS

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There are ineffective ways to describe characters and effective ways to describe characters.

Ineffective: He had wavy, blonde hair falling lightly over dreamy, blue eyes that sparkled when the sun hit them. He had a perfect figure covered in lean muscle, complete with rock-hard abs.

Effective: He stood with more weight on his right foot than the left, and when he took a step toward me, he walked with a slight limp. Bright green stains covered the knees of his jeans, and his palms were muddy and scraped. He held his chin high, defiantly, as he gazed down at me. With a smooth movement, he turned the brim of his baseball cap to the back and wiped his sweaty forehead with the back of his hand. When he cocked a smile, I winced at seeing blood soiling his teeth.

The biggest, number one, most important rule when describing characters is to make every detail describe not only their appearance, but simultaneously reveal something about their personality. Telling us your character's eye color usually won't be relevant to their personality unless there's some kind of ethnic division where blue-eyed people are discriminated against or some of the like.

In my example above, look at the ineffective description. Can you tell me a single thing about his personality? Your answer should be no. Well, maybe we can gleam something from the perfect figure and muscle, but that's still vague. From that, we deduce either 1. he's narcissistic and works out to get girls, 2. he's some kind of athlete 3. his lifestyle revolves around being fit, such as being a gangster, bodyguard, cop, firefighter, stunt double. So really, you can't tell anything about him at all.

Now look at the effective description. This guy is limping, his jeans are dirty, his hands are dirty and scraped, he's sweaty, and his teeth are bloody. He was obviously just in a fight, or he fell down a set of stairs. But then it says that he held his chin high (proudly) and cocked a smile. For most guys who are injured like that, the way he's reacting to his injuries points to the conclusion that he was just in a fight, and he won (or he did some major damage to the other guy). See how that tells a better story about that character? See how much you can tell about him without describing his eye or hair color or the shape of his nose or the cut of his jawline?

Of course, mention their hair color and eye color if you really want to. Many times, that's how we tell people apart because those are very defining traits that usually don't change from day to day, but they become cliché when mentioned too often or with too much emphasis. If they have rainbow-dyed hair, then that might be a good thing to focus on because it defines their personality. Mentioning your character's brunette hair as if it's the only thing defining them really looks shallow. A person is more than their hair color or the shape of their face.

(Again, these so-called superficial traits can most definitely be mentioned in the correct context. For example, if in a society of tall, fair-skinned, narrow-nosed individuals you find someone who is short, pudgy, with a round face and thick nose, then you'd definitely want to mention those things because it sets that person apart.)

When talking about characters, since the readers can't physically see them, they need to have defining characteristics that are memorable. That's why hair and eye color usually aren't the greatest traits to describe your character with. If you have a large cast of characters, there will probably be several people with black hair, red hair, blonde hair, or brown hair. They get muddled together.

Example: In Eragon, the witch Angela is frequently described by her hair. It's red and frizzy, and she's the only character described that way. For her, the red hair correlates to a fiery, eccentric personality. It makes her different, so it's a good defining trait. Try to keep these defining traits to a minimum so you don't overload your readers with information. Give each character just a couple traits each that you can use as cue words when introducing that character the first time and for subsequent scenes.

In Harry Potter, (I can't remember this exactly—it's been many years for me—so forgive me if this is wrong) Harry has the lightning scar and round glasses. Hermione is buck-toothed, Ron has red hair and freckles. Hagrid is huge, Dumbledore has long hair and half-moon glasses, etc. Now, each time that character comes into a scene, if you use those words, the reader should know exactly who you're talking about. It keeps them from confusing characters if they can associate a few key elements to each one.

Think of unique traits to define your characters. Maybe one person always carries around a sharpie and writes on their arm. Someone else could always be chewing bubble gum. (In Death Note, L is always eating sweets, Mello always has a chocolate bar in hand, and Near has toys.) Maybe one character gets in a lot of fights, so their nose is really crooked from getting broken so often. Someone else has a really hideous haircut their mother made them get. Another could be chronically ill—coughing all the time. Someone could clap a lot when they talk. Another could have dimple when they smile, making them look like a child even though they're in their 20s.

Note: Make sure each character has a different set of defining traits/cue words. If two people are defined as buck-toothed, and that's their only defining trait, we won't be able to tell them apart. By all means, mention similarities when comparing and contrasting to another character, but make sure there are other traits unique to each specific character.

Use the physical characteristics in synergy with their personalities and role in the story. A character could be very short, but a brilliant fighter (Yoda!). Someone could be big and scary looking and be very serious and gruff. There could be a dark-haired magician with a big, curly mustache. Working with stereotypes here sometimes could benefit you. Work with them. Tiny motormouths, muscly thugs, a guy in a trench coat and sunglasses. You don't always have to be completely original. Visually, we seem to understand and relate to the stereotypes a lot, so those can be an avenue to explore in your writing. When applied to fictional characters, these are called archetypes. (Google character archetypes, and you should get a lot of results. They're very useful. James Cameron used a ton of archetypes in the movie Avatar, for instance, an a ton of movies have these. They're more for character roles than for description, but they may help you in creating a physical description that matches the role.)

So the key point here: the physical appearance of your character should match their personality. Don't give us a very timid, mousy character who wears booty-shorts, tons of brightly colored make-up, and hooker boots. Don't make a happy-go-lucky character wear all black with hair falling over their eyes. Keep it real and believable.

Things to consider about physical appearance (but which ones you do bring into your story depend entirely on the character and the story you want to tell. You won't and shouldn't talk about ALL of the following for every character.):

-What kind of clothes do they wear? What's the state of said clothes—dirty, ripped, soiled, clean, neat and pressed, immaculate, etc.?

-Do they have any injuries?

-Do they have a distinct defining feature—hooked nose (like Snape!) always buried in the pages of a book, thin lips always pursed into a line, etc.? (Usually, I advise people to avoid describing facial features, but when used in congruence with something else like here, they can provide a vivid image of the character, so use your own discretion with this.)

-Do they have an object they always carry around with them—a book, a doll, candy, a flask of ale, etc.?

-Any tattoos or special markings?

-Hats, jewelry, other accessories?

EXERCISE: For each trait listed below, make up a character and write a short physical description of them to portray the trait, like I did in my example at the beginning. You are not limited to just the traits listed; go ahead and add others to your description if you choose, but make sure the one listed is included.

1. Vain and Narcissistic

2. Dirty and repulsive

3. Triumphant and proud

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