Some are in portuguese but I'll try to translate cuz I really wanna post it here exactly how I left them 😁
THANK YOU ALL AGAIN ❤
Comment what you think about them and if you remember in which scenes they happened 😉
They are not chronologically ordered. I just had ideas and wrote them down haha
And this is only for COMPLETE THE INCOMPLETE
[ ] - I didn't do it
[x] - I did it
- [x] The bun while spooning bc of the hair on his face. (Neal told her he didn't like it, so she presumes he doesn't too)
[this was really the first idea I had for this fic... went from so little to so much]
- [x] Neal and Gideon are drug dealers
- [x] END IT WITH A "WHATS THE NEWS, MRS JONES?" OH DAMN COLIFER
- [ ] Emma's contact lenses start to melt
[this one was supposed to be on the fire haha]
- [x] Killian sees his mother crying in their marriage
- [x] Make an emotional daddy-daughter opening of the chap (MAKE THEM THINK DAVIDS GONNA DIE MHUAHAHA)
- [ ] He cries when she's rescued
- [ ] She comforts him at night, his head on her chest. He's lost Liam. Everyone he loved. He can't lose her too.
- [ ] Next chap starts with Killian calling Elsa and Jefferson
- [x] Emma tells her parents she and Killian are together
- [x] When Emma goes to buy her baby daughter's crib, a guy named Walsh flirts with her
- [x] Henry draws on Killian's back.
- [x] She's working rlly hard now bc shes the sheriff and she goes to his bed at like 2am
- [ ] Epilogue: they're on their way to the hospital. He's driving. A contraction hits her and she's squeezes her fingers around the holder of the car door, her wedding ring sparkling.
- [x] She kisses him and the red of her Rudolph red nose gets him with red sharpie on his cheek
- [x] Don't forget about baby Neal
[I just had to keep writing this because it's so easy to forget him and Buckley jfc 😂😂😂]
- [x] They have to wonder in the silent school BEFORE the show bc Mary Margaret will be giving birth during the play and Emma and Killian will be the ones taking care of everything
- [x] Mary margaret asks if they could go to the school (the school they attended) and play santa claus and an elf. Emma teases MM about her belly
- [x] David brings Henry to watch the play. And then takes him home when it ends. Emma and Killian take a bus like old times after going for a walk on their old deserted school and remember where they first met.
- [x] Henry takes a photo with Killian as Santa
- [x] Labio mordido - nervosa
[bitten lip - nervous (EMMA)]
- [ ] He goes to Neal to defend emma (threatens him)
- [x] He teaches how to cook to her
- [x] Doctor appointment cuz something is wrong (considering on having Emma not able to have any more kids) and that night Rose has dinner there for the first time
- [x] Adicionar K no colar dela
[Add the letter K to her necklace]
- [x] O Graham vai la a casa dos charmings nos anos dela para entregar as chaves e eles conhecem se
[Graham goes to the charmings' house on her bday to give some keys to David and they meet each other there]
- [x] Henry pooping for the first time on the toilet lmao
- [ ] "Can you play the ball with me?" And right in the nuts haha
[I know this idea isn't really original because you just keep seeing it in comedies but jfc it literally happened to my father some time ago and I had to write it 😂 - tho I never wrote it haha]
- [x] They found Neal and David takes her home. She goes right to the bathroom bc she isnt feeling well and she throws up. David is there holding her and they both fall on the floor, she in her arms while he comforts her. Killian who was at home, sees the scene at the doorway. He asks what happened and David mouths "later" with his chin on top of her head
- [x] Emma's bday - he was working and he comes home at midnight for her. They hug because it all happened on that day.
- [x] He gives her another necklace that says "Incomplete" or "You're special" and he worries that it isn't her style anymore. It was her 5-years-ago style.
- [x] Bleeding out in the first month
- [x] They go out one night and she really needs to breastfeed 😂 (Killian stays there and thats when he and Rose start dating)
- [x] Killian meets Rose
- [x] He never thought she'd like him back bc she's been over him with Neal
- [x] Mary Margaret is having a baby so Emma has her own apartment
- [x] They read together the sequel
- [x] "You're so different now"
- [x] Emma tells him that now no one would date her, nor she wanted to, after everything she's been through
- [x] Killian brings Rose over. It is hell for Emma.
- [x] Meanwhile ^, Emma sees pictures of herself and Killian when they used to date that she's never seen before in MM's scrapbook
- [x] Emma works at Granny's bc Granny retired. So, she works with her granddaughter Ruby and a new other employee called Rose which happens to be Killian's future girlfriend
- [x] Killian is the one who sings to Henry since she doesn't.
- [x] Emma has always told henry when he was pregnant "I'm so sorry." while she cried. Now when he's crying she says that and he remembers and stops crying.
- [x] "Why does she eat so fast?" "She got the habit from the system" and when she comes back: "oh Killian told me you are an orphan!"
- [x] (And also Olivia had told her about them being foster sisters)
- [x] "Sorry, I thought you had told her..." "The last thing I want is their pity."
- [ ] Peixe aranha : spray and squeeze
[there's a weird sea fish that has big spines and when the sea water is too hot there are lots of them here on the beaches - idk the animal's name in english hahaha - but it hurt my sis last summer so I wanted to write it for Henry but eh]
- [x] "You like Killian's lasagna, baby?" (6 meses) ele fotografa a cara dele engracada a provar a lasanha e n e ao acaso q ela a rir aparece nas fotos
[killian takes photos of his funny face while he tastes for the first time lasagna and it's not an accident that she also appears in those photos with them with her breathtaking smile]
- [x] She falls asleep while working bc shes too exhausted
- [x] Neal comes back when Henry turns one and she throws up
- [x] SHE FINDS NEAL AFTER SHE BECOMES THE SHERIFF AND SHE HELPS GOLD FIND HIS SON
- [x] Graham dies of heart attack and she becomes the sheriff. It's not what she had planned for her life but all she ever wanted was to help people, defeat the bad guys, be the hero, the savior.
- [x] She's been exhausted so she forgets to go get Henry from his nanny but Killian goes. She feels very guilty and thinks she's a bad mother
- [x] A woman starts judging her for being mother at such a young age
- [ ] Swimming with Henry at the beach
- [ ] "Let's go on vacation" "Like where? Neverland?" "I'm serious. We could do it"
- [x] They find old notebooks from high school and see KIDH
- [ ] "We never got to go on a date.."
- [x] She almost uses his toothbrush
- [x] "I kinda of went into depression after you left..." She tells him while they look at a photo book at her parents' house. "It's just that... You were a REALLY good crush." She teases him.
- [x] "Do you want to come and have dinner with Jeff and Elsa?" "I havent really talked to them since you left.." "I know. But they also told me you didnt talk to anyone after I left.. Its not like you replaced them.. They understand you."
- [x] Jeff tells him if he wanna speed up their relationship and make her tell him she loves him already he should try to make her jealous and thats why he sleeps with Rose.
- [x] "She's actually insomniac" "great! Then it's easy. Take that waitress home, sleep with her, make it noisy." "Jeff!" Elsa disagrees.
- [ ] "Killian was my first time" girls night
- [ ] Emma gets pregnant but that risks her life so Killian tells her he can't do it, that he can't lose her, so she goes to abort. It is a very difficult time for them
- [x] Olivia finds Emma working at the bar and sees Killian with Rose. "So? No Killy?"
- [x] 1. Make her jealous 2. Tell her it won't work out and see if she responds 3. Just let it happen with time
- [x] "Did you see relief when you told her about Rose?" "Jeff nowadays I can't see anything in her. It's like I can't read her anymore. She had walls when we met, but now? They're bloody gigantic."
- [x] He takes her home after the surgery "I hate hospitals" and helps her to the couch where she falls asleep while he cooks her dinner
- [x] The girls at the diner invite her for a night out and she can't go because of Henry so Killian offers to take care of him
- [x] She changes her dress three times because she doesn't feel okay with her body after pregnancy and he notices that
- [x] "Why didn't you ask me to take care of him?" He asks her when she comes back.
- [x] Killian works at nights so although he might know nothing about taking care of a baby, he'll be there to help and learn and just be there if something happens.
- [x] His bday gift (the necklace) was always in her bag and he asks her about it
- [x] "Well something happened after the delivery for sure, because this isn't normal at all." "I've been bleeding like a water tap!" "It could be because of the hormones-" "I can't even fucking stand!"
- [x] When Killian and Rose break up, Rose blames Emma so she sets her up at Granny's, making it look like she stole money from the cash. Emma gets fired and that's how she later becomes the sheriff. Reasons Granny fires her: she's been wearing new clothes (cuz Mary Margaret had told her she had to love herself so they went shopping) and bc Rose found out she was caught stealing once with Neal. "See what loving myself got me into?"
- [ ] Glamping - stargazing. "I just wish I hadn't met him." (Neal). He kisses her.
- [x] "So what do you think of her?" "She's a little bit too chatty, no?" "Well, at least she talks to me." (Indirect for her). Her smile fades a little but she quickly fakes a small laugh. (Walls up!!) "yeah, I- you're right."
- [x] Rose and Killian on one couch. Emma on the other. The 3 of them watching a movie. "Hey." And Emma looks bc she thinks he's calling her. Apparently she's wrong. "You've got something on your chin." They share giggles and kisses and Emma never looks but is dying inside.
- [x] "Gosh! These scenes are always so awkward." ^^
- [x] Buckley goes and lays on top of Emma and he can't help but watch her caressing his dog.
- [x] Emma + crying baby - regina's ep at the hospital
- [ ] It's her first date. "Sorry I didn't think it'd be this windy." "It's okay." And she does a ponytail like the old times. "Could you put your glasses on right now?"
- [ ] "When you asked me about my glasses... i'm not that Emma anymore. I'm a worse Emma." "And you think I am a better Killian? Look at this. I hurt you. I got you fired."
- [x] Cordao cai
- [x] Jefferson is drunk every single night and Killian discovers why. Elsa refused his proposal because she wasn't ready. Emma and Elsa talk because Emma wasn't ready for Henry, and now here she is.
- [x] MM tells Killian how after he left she changed her appearance to look stronger
- [x] Neal's coloring books
- [x] Why Henry is Henry
- [x] A rose pergunta lhe quando estao sozinhas quanto tempo ela vai ter por ca. "One year, at least." E ela olha para ela com uma cara de bitch. "I just... I don't know how to be alone with Henry, not yet.... but,... please just pretend I'm not here. Don't give up on Killian just because I'm here. He's a great guy and he deserves someone with him."
^^ isto tem de ser dps do "at
least she talks with me"
[this gotta be after the "at least she(Rose) talks to me]
[i just realized I'm meeting Rose McIver in 56 days LMAO she's the bad guy (one of them) in this fanfic but I love her sm]
- [x] David to Killian "he calls you Swan?"
- [x] She's reading pregnancy books and she rethinks if she should just skip her love life chapter
- [x] He cries when they 🌮 and she jokes with him "are u always that emotional when u orgasm?"
- [x] "I used to think we were about to be something beautiful"
- [x] She starts going for a run bc she feels bad about herself
- [ ] The night Henry turns 1 she tells him she should leave. He tells her everything.
- [ ] "Why are u so afraid of staying? I think its bc u can see a future here. A good one."
- [x] CREME NO NARIZ COM O HENRY
[chantilly on Henry's nose]
- [x] "Wait there's something you need to know... my body... is not what it used to be."
- [ ] The next year they meet Odette, her hand was interlaced with his, a ring on her finger, one-year-old in his arms and Henry holding her other hand.
- [x] They name her daughter Joanna bc of Killian's gone sister.
- [x] "Didn't you learn anything with Olivia?!"
- [x] Buckley attacks Rose hahahaha
- [x] "I'm fine... life just... didn't go as I planned. After the system... all those shitty families... I just thought, life would reward me with good now."
- [ ] "I found an apartment online for me and Henry. It's perfect. And now I'm the sheriff. This is all I've wanted in life so, yeah I think I can do this now on my own." "Is it?" "What?" "Is it all you've wanted in life?" "What does that mean?" Ela continua a resistir e ele a insistir ate ela explodir "I CAN'T HAVE YOU IN MY LIFE."
[ignore the portuguese I'm too lazy to translate]
- [x] "EMMA! You should be careful with your friend. Rose and I went to a pub last night and HE FUCKING WORKED THERE EMMA HE'S SEX ON THE LEGS HOW CAN YOU NOT DO IT." "Wait what, you found Killian?" "Damn yes, Rose did more than finding him last night. They were all giggly and HE'S SOOOO FLIRTY I MEAN HE LOOKS SO SHY."
- [x] "And you're thinking on giving it a try?" "Idk, maybe." She turned her back to him to wash the dishes - something that she did every single day on the diner. "Go for it..." she chuckled, broken inside. "I mean... what do you have to lose, right?"
- [x] Mom Swan [MM-EMMA] conversation about the levels of love. She tells him about it.
By the way, exactly today one year ago, I BEG YOU was being published for the first time ❤