Update: I've corrected all visible grammar mistakes :)
I just re-read previous chapters and oh my god.
Back then- when I started writing- I started a sentence with:
.And, *facepalms*
The grammar is bad, I don't use this font when a character is thinking- not to mention everything is rushed.
My writing ability isn't good but it's improved a lot compared to back then. I could make the story far more interesting and have further development with Eren and how he leaves
(Y/N) differently- (Y/N) can also meet Levi differently too.
The problem is:
I won't be able up update new chapters- I'd be updating old ones for a while and then continue with the story.
Please comment your thoughts!
Or I can just leave everything alone and continue on with the story :3