Wait...What? ~A Louis Tomlins...

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Torie has never had luck with her favorite celebrites. Luck finally goes her way when her friend DaRae invite... Higit pa

Wait...What? ~A Louis Tomlinson FanFiction~
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty

Chapter Fourteen

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~Louis' POV~

So when I told Torie I had everything for our date planned, I lied. Hey can you blame me? I wanted to pretend thst I was calm, cool, and under control. But the truth is, I was so nervous. I wanted to impress her so badly.

So badly, in fact, that I had to go to go to the very last place I would ever go to for advice on how to impress a girl.

I knocked on the door. After a few moments of no one answering, I opened the door.

Harry had DaRae half-naked and pinned against the wall. "Hey, Harry. I need your help."

"Huh?" Harry turned around quickly, letting DaRae fall to the floor.

"Hey!" She said, getting up off the ground.

"I'll get back to you in a second babe. This will only take a moment," he reassured her.

DaRae shrugged and grabbed Harry's shirt off the floor and slipped it over her head.

"I can't believe I'm saying this Harry, but I need your help, " I admitted in defeat, looking down at the ground.

"With what?" he asked confused.

"I don't know what to do for Torie's first date. I wanted to sit at the hotel room and watch scary movies, but I didn't know if she would like those."

"Go get her some coffee?" Harry suggtested.

I groaned, putting my head down. So much for go to Harry for advice.

"Actually, Harry isn't too far off." DaRae interjected. "Go buy her some tea. Then, go buy the movie rental place and get Peter Pan--the animated version and the one with the real people in it because she hasn't seen the second one. And maybe add a little Louis touch."

"Sounds good. Anything else?"

"Yeah. Have fun. Don't be nervous. She really likes you." DaRae added with a smile.

I grinned. "Thank you."

"You're so amazing," Harry said, moving closer to her.

"Not as amazing as you," she moved in closer to him. Then the two of them flew to each other like magnets.

"OKAY, so I'm going to leave. Harry you need to get ready for the show."

Again, Harry dropped DaRae. "Oh yeah, right."

*

At the concert, all I could do was watch Torie. She was so beautiful. I couldn't wait to impress her on our date tonight.

"Ummm Louis?" Liam said to me.

"What?" I asked confused.

"You have to sing," Niall instructed.

I shrugged. "Sorry love, but I don't really care."

The crowd burst into laughter.

"You were suppose to sing that line Louis," Zayn said through laughter.

I shrugged again and looked at Torie, giving her a wink.

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~Destany's POV~

OH MY FUCKING GOD.

After the concert, Liam and I went on a date. We did the whole 'dinner at a fancy restaurant and moonlight walk on the beach' thing. My favorite part of the whole night was after we got back to the hotel. Liam and I had both had maybe a little too much wine.

Let's just say that if Liam hadn't passed out, I would have gotten...

THE PAYNE TRAIN.

FUCK.

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~Niall's POV~

When we got back to the hotel, Maela fell right to sleep. I snuggled into her, holding her close. She was so beautiful. I watched her breathe as she sleplt peacefully. I smiled down at her and kissed her temple lightly.

"I love you, Maela."

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~Harry's POV~

"So how about that date?" DaRae laughed as she nibbled on my earlobe.

I laughed, lifting her shirt over her head. "Maybe a different night."

She laughed into my kiss before pushing me onto the bed.

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~Torie's POV~

Once we got to our new hotel, Louis instructed me to wait with the rest of the girls until everything was set up. When it was ready, Louis came to get me.

"Are you ready, my lady?" he said, holding an arm out for me.

I giggled and took his arm.

"Here we are!" He turned the knob of the door and revealed a pillow fort made of blankets and pillows from the hotel beds.

"Aww, Louis!" I threw my arms around his neck.

He chuckled. "Do you like it?"

"umm yeah!" I said, making my way inside the fort.

"Want a cup?" he said, holding out a cup of tea.

I smiled, taking the cup from him. He came back in the fort with a portable DVD player. "What movie are we watching?" I asked.

"You'll see." he said, turning on the movie. It turned out to be the Peter Pan i had never seen before.

"I heard you hadn't seen it," he said, placind a blanket around the two of us.

"You heard right," I replied, taking a sip of tea.

We watched the movie, snuggled close together.

MERP.

He smelled so good.

When the movie was over Louis asked what my favorite part of the movie was.

"Probably when he doesn't know whaat a kiss is, so he gives her an acorn." I admitted.

He nodded and then put in the Disney version.

When Peter Pan showed up at Wendy's house, Louis crawled out the fort. Curious, I followed him.

"Louis?"

He was standing on the bed in just his pajama pants. I laughed. "what are you doing?"

"Come with me Torie!" He held his hand out for me. I giggled, taking his hand.

"Where are we going?" I asked once I was on the bed.

"To Neverland!" He yelled out before hopping to the floor. He yanked me down with him, our fingers intertwined.

we kept hopping and running around the room, both of us laughing at our childish game. Louis missed his the bed and went tumbling down on the fort taking me with him.

I fell, screeching in amusement as I fell on top of Louis. I looked into his beautiful blue eyes and melted. I couldn't resist. I leaned in and kissed him.

We kissed passionately as I snaked my fingers into his hair. We rolled around on the floor in a heat embrace. When Louis had rolled over on top of me, he pulled away, breathing heavily.

"So what do you say? Can I take you to Neverland?" he asked.

MERP.

I nodded, and we contnued to kiss.

Let's just say Louis took me ALL THE WAY to Neverland.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ooh Neverland ;) hahah. I actually liked it a lot. I hope you guys liked it too! Please vote and comment so I know you guys like it! Bye lovelys!

-DaRae(: xx

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