Princesses on adventure (EDIT...

By AshRaven4

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In this story, Five princesses set out on a quest to find out who harmed their parents, and why. As they meet... More

The surprise attack Part 1
SHE'S NEVER WHAT? Part 2
The guys Part 3
Hold on....she can't eat? Part 4
Meeting with Lisa Part 5
Discussions Part 6
Cover names Part 7
The earth palace Part 8
Ecryn's Inventory Part 9
Ecryn's inventory (2) Part 10
The unknown character Part 11
Our differences Part 12
Phoenix's Call Part 13
Dark God staff Part 14
Flame's inventory Part 15
Flame's inventory (2) Part 16
The Earth Temple part 17
On the brink of death Part 18
SHE LIVES!!!! Part 19 (B-day special)
Ecryn's new weapons (XMAS Special) Part 20
(NEW YEAR SPECIAL!) Part 21
The Feast Part 23
Underwater cave Part 24
Elaine's inventory Part 25
Elaine's inventory 2 Part 26
Eclair's Apology Part 27
Un-invited guest Part 28
Travelling back Part 29
Sae's BACK Part 30
Unwanted Kiss Part 31
Warm up fight Part 32
Our phones Part 33
Creepy Visions Part 34
Air temple Part 35
Inserting the Items Part 36
SSF Part 37
Sky's inventory (1) Part 38
Sky's inventory (2) Part 39
The truth about 'Cloudy Puff' Part 40
The beginning of a dance battle Part 41
The winner Part 42
Meeting their family Part 43
Untitled Part 44
Longest Kiss ever Part 45
First thunder gate Part 46
2nd Thunder Gate Part 47
Way to the divine tower Part 48
We vamouse after saving them Part 49
Getting the missing ones Part 50
Èclair's inventory (1) Part 51
Èclair's inventory (2) Part 52
Èclair's inventory (3) Part 53
The quest for Kaeru Part 54
Kaeru's back Part 55
Beginning of the fight!!!! Part 56
The truth/Sent to earth Part 57
Kristen love/Bloodlust Part 58
Getting ready for the ball Part 59
Eclair's - Part 60
She gave in too easily Part 61
She forgave him?!?!? Part 62
Wedding slam Part 63
Louise's wedding Part 64
Yui's Wedding Part 65
Izumi's Wedding Part 66
Rei and Mio's Wedding Part 67
Her reaction (Final chapter) (Valentine's SPECIAL!) Part 68

To the Water palace (Thanking Special) Part 22

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By AshRaven4

This chapter is dedicated to the people i care about most: momoaapeyij999AnyellaDansapphiregirl22cococupcake8leslie1246everdreaming21_Nyla_Hiroshima-tejirik29call_me_crazy_Magdala13maddog12345678SilverDragonRiderSummerHaze106Shada06dananonymousTfame29kimeco24, @Rejoki, a6pumplin!!!!!

<-If your name isn't sited here, it doesn't mean that i don't care about you, it's just that these people gave me a lot of support and inspiration. Sorry if you aren't mentioned.->

<Éclair then rose her head then stared at the sky, she then grinned and went back to sleep.

Meanwhile, when Éclair was sleeping, Sakon was still trying to talk to Sky.>

Sakon: SKY! I-

Sky: will shut up before I get blown to the other side of Tritanius!

<He backed away from her and shut his mouth and looked on the other side averting her gaze. She then walked away with anger in her.

They kept on packing, an hour later, Éclair came out yawning.>

Sky: Éclair?

Yato: aren't you supposed to be sleeping?

Éclair: any one says I should go back to sleep and I will electrocute them!

<They all stopped bothering her. Éclair then gave a quick glance towards Miketsukkami; she then grinned and walked off. As soon as Éclair started to help, they were going much faster. Éclair kept on giving them instructions, and in a few minutes, they were done.>

Lisa: That is exactly why I say that we really need you on this adventure.

Éclair: thanks. But I'm not that helpful, I wasn't really able to do anything...

Elaine: The fact that you wasted your sleeping time just to guide us, is helping!

Éclair: seriously?

Ecryn: YEAH!

<Éclair gave a wry smile. She then frowned as Lisa and Miketsukkami were speaking, she gave a cold, icy look, but she stopped as she sensed something bothering her.>

Éclair: (thoughts) Hold on.......................is somebody seriously using caged heart????

<She looked around but didn't notice anything. She clicked her tongue and shook her head.>

Flame: why are you clicking your tongue?

Bunshichi: is something the matter?

Éclair: no.........well, let's go. I'm starting to get bored.

<They all nodded, it took them 10 hours to reach the water kingdom. At first, they saw a weird tree guarded by wolves, and around it were just autumn leaves.

Elaine opened the door and went through. They went through waterfalls and other waters. They then went in, and as they did, they saw the water palace.>

Ecryn: The water palace

Elaine: huh? Oh...................yeah.

Ecryn: And there is the Water Kingdom!

Lisa: why is it so dark?

<Every one snapped their heads in her direction. Including Miketsukkami.>

Lisa: what?

Miketsukkami: don't you know?

Yuima: she doesn't know?

Lisa: know that what?

Sakon: oh wow...

Bunshichi: you don't know...

Yato: That only two Kingdoms aren't all that normal here!

Sky: The thunder Kingdom...

Flame: both have one thing in common

Elaine: The fact...

Éclair: That it's always dark there.

Elaine: Here our palace is more.............of a palace.

Elaine: ours is more like a dojo, but with a little more.......you know................thunder.

Lisa: I know for thunder, but not for water.

Éclair: right!

Elaine: forgot.

Lisa: right...so where are we going here?

Elaine: Follow me.

<They all followed her for 30 minutes. They kept on walking until they had gotten to a tavern called: "Flooding Spirits.>

Lisa: What kind of name is that?

Elaine: that's like me asking you what kind of name is shock – a – rella! What is it? A thunder version of Cinderella???

Lisa: people hate it when outsiders say that!

Elaine: SO I'M AN OUTSIDER?!?!?!?!

Lisa: YES YOU ARE!

Éclair: both of you! SHUT UP!

<They both quit screaming.>

Elaine: Ecryn, I'm switching rooms with you.

Éclair: ENOUGH!

<They all gasped.>

Éclair: cry baby.

Elaine: huh?

Éclair: you know well that Lisa is someone who sticks to rules, as long as they've never seen you set foot in the thunder palace, you're doomed to electrocution. She wasn't joking.

Elaine: ............

Éclair: and you! Pudding cup!

Lisa: hey!

Éclair: You also know well that Elaine hates to be called an outsider! You could've found a better way to tell her that!

Lisa: ..................

Éclair: now.......shake on it!

Both girls: ..............

Éclair: do it before someone starts to smell like grilled fish.

<They both looked at each other, shook hands, smiled and sighed knowing that they weren't getting electrocuted. But after that she dropped thunder on them.>

Lisa: WE SHOOK ON IT!

Elaine: YEAH! Why did you do that?????

Éclair: that, was for wasting our time. Let's go!

<They both looked at each other then sighed. Sky chuckled, but later on, she eyed Éclair in a questioning look.>

-1 hour later-

Elaine: so like, tomorrow, you guys have to wear swimsuits!

Flame: why?

Elaine: oh, the temple is underwater.

Flame: WHAT?

Ecryn: Don't worry, if you're with her, your fire won't be put out!

Flame: oh good.

Lisa: so do we actually have to get swimsuits??

Elaine: yeah! Everybody!

Sakon: why?

Elaine: you'll see!

Yato, Bunshichi, Yuima, Miketsukkami: TELL!

Elaine: TOMORROW! Hear that Éclair?

Éclair: yea sure.

<She smiled while the others just stared.>

Miketsukkami: are you really going with it?

<Éclair nodded her head and kept on reading.>

Éclair: I'm going to bed.

Lisa: good night!

The others: GOOD NIGHT!

Éclair: good night

---The next day---

-At the beach-

-10 am-

Elaine: oh my gosh you guys are so horrible!

The boys: what?

Elaine: .................................

Elaine: OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! You guys ARE SOOO KAWAII!!!!! That means cute by the way.

<The boys all stared at the girls in their amazing bikinis.

Elaine: Ecryn, you went with a curly hairstyle!!! You also went with a frilly and bow little innocent girl! And for the bikini, it's typed black dangerous woman!!! TOTALLY FITS!!!

<Bunshichi, for some reason couldn't stop staring at what she was wearing.>

Elaine: Flame! You went with a cool fighter, nice thing with the blush! You brought your swords and bla bla bla! Going with a protective tone I see, you used a scarf to protect your fire, and don't forget the real cool gloves! You also went with a ponytail, not bad. You also took advantage of using long socks! And don't forget the real cool fire marks on your bikini top! AWESOME!

<Yuima blushed at what she was wearing.>

Elaine: SKY!! Totally unexpected!!! You totally went with a "I'm adorable" theme! Going with a white bikini was to be expected! But what you did with your hair is JUST TO CUTE!!!!!

<Sakon (for some reason) stopped doing anything when he saw Sky, and since they were playing volleyball, he got hit in the face.>

Elaine: LISA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOTES COOL! You went with a "Senpai (teacher) I'm dirty!" theme! Not bad, not bad at all! You tied your hair in a: "I'm a good girl", but then looking down, IT SAYS THE TOTAL OPPOSITE! TOTES COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

<Miketsukkami let his ice cream fall when he saw her, he then bent down, and as he was getting up, someone ran into him making him fall down.>

Elaine: Now for me. I went with, A WAVY PONYTAIL! Showing my carelessness and happiness, I topped it off with the greatest thing of all! A STRIPED BIKINI! Most boys here love a girl with striped bikinis, it just makes them feel hot!

<As she said that, a few boys began to check her out.>

Elaine: see?

<They were all just having fun until Elaine stopped all of her activities, and so did the others, they all stopped upon the sight given by Éclair.

This time, almost all the boys were checking her out, and some were even whistling, but weirdly enough, when Miketsukkami stared at her, Lisa pushed him in the water.>

Elaine: E-Éclair................y-you went........................WITH A TOTALLY COOL OUTFIT!!!!!!! Your hair let down, of which only a part is braided, then you show us you're fierce nature! You totally wore a warrior and sexy themed bikini! YOU'RE JUST PERFECT!

Lisa: don't you think it was too much?

Éclair: do you have a problem with what I'm wearing?

Lisa: not really but-

Éclair: I'm used to it. My mom made me wear these when I started going to the beach, so-

Lisa: hold on...you wore things like that as a kid?

Éclair: NO! Only when I turned 10.

The girls: why?

Éclair: cos she wanted me to, to tell the truth..................it was punishment. And at the time, I was really embarrassed sooo.............yeah.

Sky: you're mom's is evil.

Éclair: You know right?

<They all started to laugh, but none really understood what she meant.>

Elaine: OK! Let's get going!

<They all jumped in the water, right then, Elaine conjured something.>

Elaine: MYSTIC FLOWER!!!!!!! MERMAID FORM!

<As she said those words, she transformed into a mermaid.> 

<Their mouths all opened. As she noticed that, she used the water around them to make bubbles, thanks to these bubbles, they were able to breathe.>

Éclair: thanks.

Elaine: Now hurry! We must get to the fucking mermaid palace before the sharks come out!

<They all nodded and swam.

They swam for about 2 hours before they had gotten there. They seemed to be deep in the water, at a moment she just stopped at the middle.>

Elaine: are you ready?

All of them: for what?

Elaine: the huge jump!

All of them: huh?

Elaine: whatch this!

<She went back then started to swim at an exagerrated speed, as she neared the surface, she swirled and a huge jump before landing in the water.>

Elaine: HA! GET UP HERE!

<They all looked at each other, than began swimming. As they all got out, their water bubbles popped, but the bubbles we'rent the only things that got popped, their mouths popped open as they saw the mermaid catsle.>

The ladies: whoa.........................

The men: damn..........................

Elaine: PONDER UPON HER AMAZING BEAUTY!!

Éclair: are you Tristan's daughter?????

Elaine: as a matter of fact, yes.

<All of their mouths fell on the floor except for Ecryn.>

Ecryn: this is so cool! I've never been here although I've heard of it!

Yato: um, can we hurry????????

The others: why?

Yato: SHARKS!

Lisa: AH!

Miketsukkami: I'LL HANDLE IT!

Éclair: DON'T!

TCHZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

-Inside the mermaid castle-

<All of them smelled like grilling fish.>

Éclair: what kind, of idiotic bastard, USES ELECTRICITY WHEN HE'S IN WATER?????????????????

Miketsukkami: I'M SORRY!

The girls: YOU BETTER BE!

Elaine: fuck...............oh..................My................FUCK!

<As she screamed, the girls now realized that the stunt Miketsukkami had used had cut some of the parts on their bikinis. They then started to hide, the only one who didn't suffer was Lisa.>

Lisa: ummm?

Elaine: CLOSE YOUR FUCKING EYES!

The boys: S-SORRY!

Lisa: OH COME ON! Why didn't mine get cut! I wanted Miketsukkami to see my modesty!

Éclair: did you say something?

Lisa: NOPE! Just thinking of my idiotic cousin!

The girls: he is idiotic!

Ashraven4: Man, the girls got issues! Am I right or am I right?

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