Things I Hate About Warriors...

By moominshrooms

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Most of the earlier chapters in this book do not fit my current beliefs. The revised versions fit better, tho... More

Portraying Mental Illnesses
Grammar and Spelling
Representation of Lgbt+
Unrealistic Names
Writing Canon Characters
Unrealistic Clans
The Portrayal Of Villains
Main Character Always Becomes Leader
Rogues and... what??
Love Triangles +
I Hate You, I Love You..
Forbidden Relationships
Glorifying Powers
Pedophilia
Gender Roles
Smut
ShadowClan is evil!!!1!
Prophecies
Love At First Sight
Bias
Bullying
Permanent Queens? Who?
"You want to be a medicine cat?"
Small Things That Annoy Me
Punishments
Oblivious.
Female Protagonists Personalities
Loves Heals Illness
"Everything is wrong and I'm the only one who knows"
ThunderClan, ThunderClan.
Disabled Cats + Ableism
BloodClan fics
Shipping Ocs With Canon Characters
Insane characters
Short Stories
Representation of Lgbt+ Ⅱ
Unrealistic Names Ⅱ
Cannibalism
Grammar and spelling Ⅱ
Writing Styles
Writing Canon Characters II
The Problem With FanClans
Smut II
Short Stories II
Dumb Character Syndrome
Types of fanfics
Mental Illness ll part 1
You're Writing Shy Characters Wrong
Homophobia in Fics
You aesthetic fuckers
Fucking Moonmoon
Leader's Revelation
Rape Isn't Sexy
AsexualiTEA
Let's Talk About Suicide
Small Things That Annoy Me II
Y'all Need To Behave
Mental illness II
The End

Villains With Bad Pasts

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By moominshrooms

These are honestly the worst things ever.

I take that back, pro anorexia blogs are. But anyway, let's get back to the topic.

Villains with bad pasts are okay, until they're used all the time. And, they usually are written like this in fanfics.

I really don't see the necessity of this? How does it make your villains any better? Some people seem to think that it makes their villains deeper as a character. And it can, sometimes, but some people think this is the only way to make a deep character. Now, the villain themself is deep. The fact that someone has these thoughts that are, to everyone else, "bad" or "wrong" and believes them to "good" or "right" is deep and complex in itself.

The villain's reasoning, for example. They think they're doing something good. Sometimes it's "For The Greater Good" (Gellert Grindlewald, anyone?) Or maybe it's only for their own gain, but they still believe what they're doing is right. The idea of evil, in Warriors anyway, is very interesting and complex.

Now, why is it so bad to have a villain with a bad past?

The most obvious reason is that it's overused, including the actual series. Scourge, Tigerstar, Brokenstar, Hawkfrost... They all have experienced one bad experience, or a bad past. Most fanfictions are the same.

But, there's another often overlooked reason.

We've all encountered those toxic Scourge fans who excuse all of the "evil" things he's done. (There's no problem with liking Scourge, the problem is when his "evil deeds" are excused and overlooked)

Now, some of those fans act like that because they're those pathetic stans who can't admit that their favourite did wrong. But some fall into the more alarming category.

These other fans (bare in mind that this isn't limited to Scourge fans) actually believe that it's okay for Scourge to murder, and hurt, because he had a bad past.

Do you know how toxic this kind of thinking is? It's terrible. Mental illness/bad past gives a reason, a cause behind and action, but never an excuse.

Mental illness/bad past gives a reason, a cause behind and action, but never an excuse.

Repeat that. Over and over.

What's terrible is that apparently one of the Erin's have said "Don't judge Scourge (it may have been another villain, but I'm almost certain it was Scourge) too harshly, he had rough start to life!"

Do you know how disgusting that is? That is enforcing the toxic belief onto people that it's okay for people who have had a bad past, have been abused, or have a mental illness to hurt, or murder, or commit some sort of crime.

It's also bad because the majority of people who read Warriors are young, generally 11-12. There are people as young as eight who read the series, I myself started at nine. Younger kids are easily influenced, even at fourteen, I am.

These children, through seeing that every villain has some sort of bad past that corrupted them, in fanfictions and in the actual series will start to think those toxic thoughts that I originally mentioned.

We need kids to understand that that isn't true. That people, no matter their circumstances (unless it's self defence, of course, or any occasional exception) should be held accountable for their actions. Mentally Ill, bad past, or completely healthy, whoever they are and whatever they've through.

Let's stop with those overused bad-backstory villains and let's bring in what villains usually are: normal people, just with bad beliefs.

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