Yuffie's Writing How-To's

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Author's Note
How to make a MEMORABLE PROTAGONIST
How to do WORLD BUILDING
How to write ROMANCE
How to write PHYSICAL FIGHTS/WEAPONS
How to SHOW vs. TELL & DESCRIPTION
How to tackle LGBTQ themes
This deserves a chapter all for itself.
How to STICK WITH A STORY
How to write VILLAINS
How to be a WRITER
How to write CLICHES
Awesome Quotes
How to DESCRIBE CHARACTERS
How to START THE STORY
How to create a CAST OF CHARACTERS
How to (not) CHEAT THE NARRATION
How to make your stories REALISTIC
How to choose POINT OF VIEW and TENSE
How to write POETRY (Guest speaker!)
How to write BACKSTORY
How to create THREE-DIMENSIONAL CHARACTERS
Something every aspiring author needs to read
How to make NON-CLICHE VILLAINS
How to CREATE A PLOT
How to write DIALOGUE
How to write BADBOYS AND BADASSES
How to NAME YOUR CHARACTERS
How to make COVERS
How to overcome PLOTBLOCK
How to write ROMANCE pt. II
How to write a STORY BLURB/QUERY
How to choose a STORY TITLE
How to make a LIKABLE CHARACTER (pt. 1)
How to make a LIKABLE CHARACTER (pt. 2)
How to make a LIKEABLE CHARACTER (pt. 3)
How to write REAL WORLD SETTINGS
How to WRITE STORY NOTES
How to make your CHARACTERS CHANGE
How to create 3D CHARACTERS (pt. 2)
How to write THE HERO'S JOURNEY
How to manipulate SENTENCE STRUCTURES
Why Romeo and Juliet is a SATIRE, not a romance!
How to portray DEPRESSION
How to write DEEP POV
The Most Important Rule of Writing
How to write ORGANIC PROSE
How to create a CALENDAR
How to GET OUT OF A WRITING SLUMP
How to Write ROMANCE SCENES
Bringing out the wet fish again.
WHAT IS LOVE?
Need Constructive Criticism?
This needs to be repeated.
Do You Have the Fire to be a WRITER?
How to COME UP WITH IDEAS
How to make your VILLAIN COMPLEMENT THE HERO
How to INJURE THE HUMAN BODY
What is a FLAW?
How to write HEALTHY vs. UNHEALTHY RELATIONSHIPS
How to ADD PLOT TWISTS
How to find the MEAT OF YOUR PLOT
How to PLOT
How to ORGANIZE YOUR SCENES
How to CRITIQUE
More on FIRST CHAPTERS
How to KEEP YOUR WRITING FOCUSED
How to use SEMICOLONS
How to SHOW EMOTIONS
How to SHOW EMOTIONAL STATES
How to create an EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER
How to IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY
How to BATTLE STEREOTYPES
How-To Mini Series: Movies to Books
Movies to Books: Warm Bodies
This is LOVE
How to REDUCE # OF SUPPORTING CHARACTERS
How to TURN OFF YOUR INNER EDITOR
How to DETAIL
How to write LOVE TRIANGLES
How to write SUBTLE ROMANCE
How to write HEROIC TRAITS AND THEIR FAULTS
How to write PIRATES
How to use BODY LANGUAGE
The VISUAL DICTIONARY
Movies to Books: Pacific Rim
How to be MORE CRITICAL OF WRITING
TV to Books: Avatar: The Last Airbender
How to create SUPERSTITIONS
TV to Books: Attack on Titan
Incredible Inspiration
The Power of Predictions!
College majors
How to write good shit.
A Reminder
How to create CONTINUITY
How to write the INCITING INCIDENT
BACKGROUND NOISE
TV to Books: Arrow
How to DESCRIBE TOUCH
On posting writing online
How to WIPE OUT HUMANITY
121 Cliched Dialogues
How to PLOT pt. 2
TV to Books: Once Upon a Time
On ORIGINAL VISIONS for your story
Romantic Dynamics
Movies to Books: Frozen
Movies to Books: Thor: The Dark World
How to write a KILLER THRILLER
If you're stuck...
How to write KIDNAPPER ROMANCES
Movies to Books: Frozen (pt. 2)
How to differentiate the ____PUNK GENRES (Guest speaker!)
Should you write in order or skip around?
How to write BIG AGE GAPS
How to SYMPATHIZE WITH THE DEAD
The Bechdel Test
How to END YOUR NOVEL
How to write PLATONIC LOVE
How to write FEMALE VILLAINS
How to make your plot more COMPELLING
How to write a COMIC RELIEF CHARACTER
Things that REALLY BUG ME
How to make your character HEROIC
How to add a DEADLINE
Got a cool idea for a story? Now break it.
Anti-procrastination websites
How to be MORE CRITICAL OF WRITING Pt. II
How to write TIMESKIPS
Basic Checklist for Your Story
Thoughts on (lack of) conflict
How to TIGHTEN YOUR WRITING
How to write ACCENTS AND DIALECTS
How to make a DEATH SADDER
On Writing: UNASKED QUESTIONS
How to write SACRIFICES
How to make your CHARACTERS RELATABLE
How to write THE CHOSEN ONE & PROPHECIES
Brandon Sanderson's Lectures on Writing!
How to write STRONG FEMALES
More on Filtering!
Why we need DIVERSITY
How to write DIVERSITY -- ADDENDUM
TV to Books: Legend of Korra
How to write FOILS
BACK UP YOUR WRITING
How to RESEARCH
How to vary SENTENCE LENGTHS
How NOT to be MYSTERIOUS
How to write MAGIC SYSTEMS
How to write Mentor/Mentee tropes
How to KILL OFF A CHARACTER
Sympathy Without Saintliness
My Story Litmus Test
How to MAKE YOUR CHARACTERS DIFFERENT
How to AVOID ROMANTICIZING BAD THINGS
How to come up with MOTIVATIONS
How to create CHARACTER GROWTH (TV to Books: ATLA pt. 2)
Movies to Books: Big Hero 6
Sexism in Literature
How to write VILLAINS (pt. 2)
How to write MENTALLY DISORDERED VILLAINS - Guest Lecturer: Mo!
How to write VILLAINS (pt. 3) - Guest lecturer: Mo!
How to write NON-OFFENSIVE THINGS
How to write UNHEALTHY RELATIONSHIPS
How to write UNHEALTHY RELATIONSHIPS - ADDENDUM
How to write a ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE
How to write ROMANCE SCENES (pt. 2)
How to PUT IT ALL TOGETHER
How to avoid the WOMAN IN REFRIGERATOR TROPE
How to REVISE YOUR STORY
How to CHOOSE YOUR PROTAGONIST
On WRITING GENRES
How to add in SUBPLOTS
How to write a SERIES
How to TURN A BAD CHARACTER GOOD
How to decide on CHAPTER LENGTHS
Internet to Books: TWITCH PLAYS POKEMON
How to do WORLDBUILDING - pt. 2
How to OUTLINE YOUR NOVEL
How to write BACKSTORIES -- pt. 2
More INSPIRATION for you!
Writing Masterpost
Narcissism in Today's Fiction?
Evidence that this guide means nothing
Trailers to Books: Black Widow
How to write INTENSE EMOTIONS
How to FALL FOR THE ENEMY
Topic Suggestions
How to structure PLOT and PACING
My beef with BEAUTIFUL CHARACTERS
Why characters act ILLOGICALLY
How to write HARD vs. SOFT MAGIC
How to MAKE YOUR OWN WRITING PROMPTS
How to write FANTASY LANGUAGES
#distractinglysexy
I don't understand arranged marriage stories
How to add SUSPENSE
Why you should READ OUT OF YOUR GENRE
More on BAD BOYS
How to write DIVERSITY pt. 2
How to write RACE IN FANTASY
Chuck Wendig, Ladies and Gentlemen
How to write UNRELIABLE NARRATORS
How to GET POPULAR ON WATTPAD
How to write MORAL DILEMMAS
How to structure PLOT AND PACING pt. 2
How to INCREASE READING SPEED
Is GETTING THE GIRL SEXIST?
How to write a WAR
REISSUE: How to make your work ORIGINAL vs. FANFICTION
How to CLEAN UP YOUR WRITING
How to find your CHARACTER'S VOICE pt. 2
Movies to Books: Cinderella (1950)
How to Plot pt. 3
Why The Hunger Games fails at worldbuilding
How to READ LIKE A WRITER
On SELF-INSERTION CHARACTERS
Uhh.... WHAT?!!???!?!?!?
The Role of Women
How to write the OPPOSITE GENDER'S POV
SELF-PUBLISHING & How to PUBLISH YOUR FANFICTION
Parting Words

How people turn EVIL

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By YuffieProductions

My good friend Limpid showed me a passage from her psychology textbook (Psychology Core Concepts, 7th edition by Philip G. Zimbardo, Robert L. Johnson and Vivian McCann) of how good people turn bad that just blew my mind, so I have to share it with all of you (but that's coming at the end of this how-to. First I'll give a few examples before providing this proposed mechanism).

I hope this is common sense, but this how-to is NOT inspiration for how you can become a psychotic dictator and commit crimes against humanity. These are ideas to explore in your stories, with your antagonists and even with your protagonists and supporting characters. This is for ideas of how to realistically make your good characters go bad or how your villains are the evil SOBs they are today.

The man who came up with this theory, Philip Zimbardo (who's one of the authors of the aforementioned textbook) is the head researcher behind the Stanford Prison Experiment. It was a research study conducted at Stanford University back in 1971 and funded for by the US Office of Naval Research. This study took male college students and assigned them to be either prisoners or guards. The "prisoners" were actually arrested and went through the entire arrest procedure. They were subjected to strip searches and given prison outfits. The guards were instructed to only call the prisoners by their assigned number. The prisoners performed degrading tasks such as cleaning the toilets with their bare hands. When punished, they'd get their mattress taken away and would have to sleep on the floor, etc.

The results were mindblowing. Both the guards and prisoners took their roles much too deeply and seriously. Some of the guards started showing genuine sadistic tendencies, subjecting the prisoners to psychological torture. The prisoners were driven to their emotional limits, some having legitimate mental breakdowns. I won't go into details of the torture and abuse they were subjected to in this how-to, but you can read about it online to understand the full scope of this study.

There are criticisms as to what you can take away from this experiment because of the subjective rather than objective nature of the study, the lack of a control group, and the theory that these students were simply "role-playing" than actually internalizing their roles, but I still believe this study is a significant piece of evidence suggesting the influence of environmental/situational effects on human behavior (again, take this entire study with a grain of salt. The results are fully up for your interpretation). You can read more about this experiment and see the actual study description given to the participants here: http://www.prisonexp.org/links.htm (also linked to in the EXTERNAL LINK).

A prominent real-life example is a prison headed by the US overseas (I won't say the name because I don't want you guys looking it up. Just reading the Wikipedia entry on it really messed me up. It took me forever to get to sleep last night because I was so traumatized by it. That's how disturbing and disgusting and horrendous the torture was. If you know what I'm talking about, please don't mention the name or in the comments, either.) What happened was American soldiers subjected these prisoners to the most inhumane physical, sexual, and psychological abuse and torture. Here's an example of inhumane behavior from this atrocious event that really stuck with me:

They took some prisoners, stripped them naked, and piled them on top of each other in a pyramid. There's a photograph of two US soldiers--a male and a female--posing behind this grinning and giving a thumbs-up to the camera. This is a VERY tame act compared to some of the things I just read about happening there, so it's a solid example of the evil in the world and shows that (seemingly) good people have treated other human beings like that. I have always been an advocate that good and evil are just socially constructed ideas, but something like this is just... I don't even think even "evil" can begin to cover it.

And  now let's wind down a little with a less disturbing but still profoundly mind-boggling experiment, the Milgram Experiment conducted at Yale University in 1961. The purpose of the study was "to test how much pain an ordinary citizen would inflict on another person simply because he was ordered to by an experimental scientist." They had subjects come in to be a "Teacher" and a "Learner". Unknown to the subjects, the "Learners" were actors, so really, all the subjects just took the role of Teacher.

The Experimenter (the one conducting the study) told the Teachers that the Learners would be asked questions. For every wrong answer, the Teacher must give the Learners an electric shock. At first, the shocks were only 15 volts, so small you probably can't even feel it. But with each wrong answer, the voltage would go up, maxing out at 450 volts, which can be lethal. The shock machine also had warning labels at a certain voltage and then XXX at 450 volts, so the Teachers were well aware that this was dangerous and life-threatening. The Teachers would give the shocks, and the Learners (they were just actors, remember, so they weren't actually getting shocked) would start screaming and begging the Teachers to stop. They were instructed to shout "I have a heart condition!" But the Experimenter continued to encourage the Teachers to give the shocks.

It was theorized only 1% of subjects would go that far because only 1% of the population are sadists. What actually happened was that SIXTY-FIVE PERCENT of the subjects went to the 450-volt max. You can see the implications of this.

Here's some great insight from my friend Limpid: "At one point (above 300 volts I think) the ‘Learner’ would just scream and then go completely silent, refusing to answer. The experimenter would tell ‘Teachers’ to treat silence as an incorrect answer and go on, but of course, two-thirds went on despite the ‘Learner’’s dangerous silence. It’s also important to note that many of the [Teachers] voiced objections, concerns, became angry with the experimenter and so on. But the important point is despite the moral conflict, they didn’t disobey the authority figure even though it was just an experimenter (who was actually a high school biology teacher and not Milgram himself)."

There seems to be a lot of validity to Milgram's experiment because it's been reproduced many times. More insight from Limpid:

"Milgram also conducted 19 different variations of the above study, varying one factor at a time. The percentage of those who obeyed went from less than 10% (‘Learner’ demanding to be shocked; having two authority figures give contradictory commands) to over 90% (instructing an assistant to deliver shocks/having a peer administer shocks). The percentage of obedience was also close to 10% when two peers were shown to rebel.
In fact, Milgram’s experiment was staged in 2010 by a French television show (http://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/homo-consumericus/201103/the-milgram-experiment-french-game-show). It allowed a live audience to vote whether or not to shock the victim in distress – and guess what – an overwhelming majority of 80% obeyed and went on to maximum shock despite the man’s screams of agony and pleas to stop, egged on by a glamorous presenter."

And now the moment you've all been waiting for, here is the mechanism of how good people can turn so evil, as proposed by Psychology Core Concepts, 7th edition by Philip G. Zimbardo, Robert L. Johnson and Vivian McCann:

How to get good people to harm others:

-Provide people with an ideology to justify beliefs for actions.

-Make people take a small first step toward a harmful act with a minor, trivial action and then gradually increase those small actions.

-Slowly transform a once-compassionate leader into a dictatorial figure.

-Provide people with vague and ever-changing rules.

-Relabel the situation's actors and their actions to legitimize the ideology.

-Provide people with social models of compliance.

-Allow verbal dissent but only if people continue to comply behaviourally with others.

-Encourage dehumanising the victim.

-Diffuse responsibility.

-Make exiting the situation difficult.

And how to get out of this cycle of evil, quoted from Limpid: "if even one person rebels, the pressure to conform with the group sharply decreases and many, many, many more people will be able to resist conformity. Also, note that the opposite of the good-to-evil list could be used for encouraging heroic behaviour."

Chew on this for a while. See how all these points can make a perfectly respectable person turn into a devil-like being. Hopefully you can make parallels between this and your characters--be it protagonist, antagonist, hero, villain, or supporting characters. This might be a mechanism to consider when making your villain commit unspeakable acts against humanity or even just start gearing them on the path toward this until they realize they're turning evil and fork off onto another road. Your hero might be the person giving those 15-volt shocks (metaphorically) and start to raise the voltage, until they snap to their senses and change their ways.

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